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Reviewer: Thurgate ( talk · contribs) 17:29, 9 May 2012 (UTC)
1. Bretagne class. Suggest - Wiki link
2. Béarn, was equipped four Parsons turbines. Suggest - Béarn, was equipped with four Parsons turbines
3. and a top speed of 21 knots. Suggest - and had a top speed of 21 knots
4. which plans to increase. Suggest - with plans to increase
5. No description of the picture in the Construction and Cancellation section.
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Reviewer: Thurgate ( talk · contribs) 17:29, 9 May 2012 (UTC)
1. Bretagne class. Suggest - Wiki link
2. Béarn, was equipped four Parsons turbines. Suggest - Béarn, was equipped with four Parsons turbines
3. and a top speed of 21 knots. Suggest - and had a top speed of 21 knots
4. which plans to increase. Suggest - with plans to increase
5. No description of the picture in the Construction and Cancellation section.
I've put the article on hold for seven days to allow you to address the issues I've brought up. Feel free to contact me on my talk page, or here with any concerns.
Thurgate (
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17:31, 9 May 2012 (UTC)