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Reviewer: Adamstom.97 ( talk · contribs) 04:19, 8 August 2017 (UTC)
I will take this for review, plan to get round to it shortly. I have seen that the article failed GA earlier in the year, but also that there has been significant work done since then, so hopefully all goes well this time. - adamstom97 ( talk) 04:19, 8 August 2017 (UTC)
Sorry it took so long to get around to this, have been busier than I anticipated when I took the review. I have listed issues in the section above that I believe need to be addressed before this article can be promoted to GA. I am placing the review on hold until that is done. A few of my noted may take a bit more work than others, but I do think they will help make the article much stronger and more appropriate for GA. - adamstom97 ( talk) 00:32, 13 August 2017 (UTC)
I have finished what had to be done at Norman Osborn page. I have fixed the infobox reducing the appearances and removed the Hellfire club, it was only issue, not worth including. I had the sources that were in the lead scattered throughout the page to give it more credibility. I dimmed the publication history section of block quotes, I left one because I felt that one was pretty good. In fictional character biography, I removed the secret wars section, fixed that easter egg, added a better image of the Green Goblin, and did combine a lot of the short paragraphs in the Hammer and Dark Avengers sections. In the powers and abilities section, I did fix with the overlinking issue. I added a short paragraph that describes what the Green Goblin's weapons are. I created new section dedicated only to the weakness, which I do agree is more of a characterization of him. Fixed some grammar issues in the other versions section. In the other media section, I combined the TV and film sections, removed the sentences that talked about the broadway musical in-depth. For the cultural impact section, I simply renamed it Reception as it was more of what critics thought of the character. I found the reference for the Notes section. And fixed all the references that needed to be done. Took a lot time finding all the writers and artists.
To think it took me about a week to get it all done. Thank you for being patient and hopefully this time my beloved article baby will pass. Take care bud. Xtremeroller ( talk) 00:21, 21 August 2017 (UTC)
Ok before I start editing can I just say two things. For the references in the lead, can I still have them referenced somewhere in the article or just in all completely deleted. Lastly, can't I just leave the image of Norman as the Goblin in the biography section, I just feel its kinda nice for the reader to have an image of Osborn in full costume, similar to Iron Patriot. Or how about if I move the image in the powers and abilities section? Just want to know before I get back to work. Xtremeroller ( talk) 06:50, 22 August 2017 (UTC)
I did it Adam finished all that had to be done, I moved the citations in the lead, made the caption in the image a little more clearer, added the main article link in the Green Goblin powers and abilities, removed the note entirely, and archived all the old references that seemed outdated. Ok, I think this is it tis time. Here we go. Xtremeroller ( talk) 21:36, 22 August 2017 (UTC)
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Reviewer: Adamstom.97 ( talk · contribs) 04:19, 8 August 2017 (UTC)
I will take this for review, plan to get round to it shortly. I have seen that the article failed GA earlier in the year, but also that there has been significant work done since then, so hopefully all goes well this time. - adamstom97 ( talk) 04:19, 8 August 2017 (UTC)
Sorry it took so long to get around to this, have been busier than I anticipated when I took the review. I have listed issues in the section above that I believe need to be addressed before this article can be promoted to GA. I am placing the review on hold until that is done. A few of my noted may take a bit more work than others, but I do think they will help make the article much stronger and more appropriate for GA. - adamstom97 ( talk) 00:32, 13 August 2017 (UTC)
I have finished what had to be done at Norman Osborn page. I have fixed the infobox reducing the appearances and removed the Hellfire club, it was only issue, not worth including. I had the sources that were in the lead scattered throughout the page to give it more credibility. I dimmed the publication history section of block quotes, I left one because I felt that one was pretty good. In fictional character biography, I removed the secret wars section, fixed that easter egg, added a better image of the Green Goblin, and did combine a lot of the short paragraphs in the Hammer and Dark Avengers sections. In the powers and abilities section, I did fix with the overlinking issue. I added a short paragraph that describes what the Green Goblin's weapons are. I created new section dedicated only to the weakness, which I do agree is more of a characterization of him. Fixed some grammar issues in the other versions section. In the other media section, I combined the TV and film sections, removed the sentences that talked about the broadway musical in-depth. For the cultural impact section, I simply renamed it Reception as it was more of what critics thought of the character. I found the reference for the Notes section. And fixed all the references that needed to be done. Took a lot time finding all the writers and artists.
To think it took me about a week to get it all done. Thank you for being patient and hopefully this time my beloved article baby will pass. Take care bud. Xtremeroller ( talk) 00:21, 21 August 2017 (UTC)
Ok before I start editing can I just say two things. For the references in the lead, can I still have them referenced somewhere in the article or just in all completely deleted. Lastly, can't I just leave the image of Norman as the Goblin in the biography section, I just feel its kinda nice for the reader to have an image of Osborn in full costume, similar to Iron Patriot. Or how about if I move the image in the powers and abilities section? Just want to know before I get back to work. Xtremeroller ( talk) 06:50, 22 August 2017 (UTC)
I did it Adam finished all that had to be done, I moved the citations in the lead, made the caption in the image a little more clearer, added the main article link in the Green Goblin powers and abilities, removed the note entirely, and archived all the old references that seemed outdated. Ok, I think this is it tis time. Here we go. Xtremeroller ( talk) 21:36, 22 August 2017 (UTC)