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Would it be possible to provide a link for Cash Sprint? Is Adobe Flash a platform or more of a software? Most would assume that it would be just software, so try and highlight the difference if there is one or provide a bit more clarity. Do not repeat previous stated lines in order to reduce redundancy within the article. It would also be helpful to elaborate more on the most recent games that have been created or updated. Maybe you could add a section that highlights the features of such games, along with what separates them from other games that may be in the same category. Provide details about Tower Defense and Bloons Games.
Overall the article is well written, information is well researched, and the page is organized rather neatly. Provided good sources that aid to the article. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Deon Quisely ( talk • contribs) 16:59, 7 March 2014 (UTC)
This feedback concerns the article generally, but is intended in particular for students in COM 257 at NCSU during the spring 2014 semester. It is based on this version from 21 March 2014. The problems and suggestions below will cover many aspects of the page including but not limited to writing quality, spelling and grammar, tone, number and quality of sources, extent of source use or misuse, citation style, formatting, layout, wikimarkup errors, stylistic issues, media use, and organization. Some will be straightforward while others will be more general or may require you to do some research into Wikipedia policies and guidelines for content, layout, sourcing, etc. Technical help for Wikipedia is easy to find here and all over the web. If all else fails, just Google your question and you'll almost certainly find answers. If you search and still have trouble (once you search), email me. Several of the items below point to specific examples, but should be generalized throughout the article.
Should this infobox be converted to the one for gaming companies? Ninja Kiwi as a website doesn't seem fitting anymore now that Flash no longer supported and Ninja Kiwi put most of their efforts on their mobile games. Speaking of which, we should mention Ninja Kiwi's transition to mobile gaming, though not sure how I would get started on that way. Qwertyxp2000 ( talk | contribs) 10:45, 30 August 2022 (UTC)
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Press releases: [7]
Would it be possible to provide a link for Cash Sprint? Is Adobe Flash a platform or more of a software? Most would assume that it would be just software, so try and highlight the difference if there is one or provide a bit more clarity. Do not repeat previous stated lines in order to reduce redundancy within the article. It would also be helpful to elaborate more on the most recent games that have been created or updated. Maybe you could add a section that highlights the features of such games, along with what separates them from other games that may be in the same category. Provide details about Tower Defense and Bloons Games.
Overall the article is well written, information is well researched, and the page is organized rather neatly. Provided good sources that aid to the article. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Deon Quisely ( talk • contribs) 16:59, 7 March 2014 (UTC)
This feedback concerns the article generally, but is intended in particular for students in COM 257 at NCSU during the spring 2014 semester. It is based on this version from 21 March 2014. The problems and suggestions below will cover many aspects of the page including but not limited to writing quality, spelling and grammar, tone, number and quality of sources, extent of source use or misuse, citation style, formatting, layout, wikimarkup errors, stylistic issues, media use, and organization. Some will be straightforward while others will be more general or may require you to do some research into Wikipedia policies and guidelines for content, layout, sourcing, etc. Technical help for Wikipedia is easy to find here and all over the web. If all else fails, just Google your question and you'll almost certainly find answers. If you search and still have trouble (once you search), email me. Several of the items below point to specific examples, but should be generalized throughout the article.
Should this infobox be converted to the one for gaming companies? Ninja Kiwi as a website doesn't seem fitting anymore now that Flash no longer supported and Ninja Kiwi put most of their efforts on their mobile games. Speaking of which, we should mention Ninja Kiwi's transition to mobile gaming, though not sure how I would get started on that way. Qwertyxp2000 ( talk | contribs) 10:45, 30 August 2022 (UTC)