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"He also appeared during the collegiate offseason with Seattle Sounders FC U-23." - He also appeared with Seattle Sounders FC U-23 during the collegiate offseason.
Done, changed to recommendation.
College and amateur
"Hansen also scored on his Conference USA debut, bagging a goal" - earning
Done, changed to "tallying a goal".
"Hansen also scored on his Conference USA debut" - put the acroynms of Conference USA in parentheses after its inital mention
Done
Wikilink the first mention of assist to
Assist (football) for non-Soccer readers
"he was named Third Team All-CUSA." - named to the
Done, changed to "he was named to the All-CUSA Third Team."
"but was named Second Team All-CUSA with final stats of three goals and three assists from 18 appearances." - , with a total of three goals and three assists from 18 appearances.
Done
"Hansen tallied a career-high 13 goals on the year" - during
Done
"and a First Team All-CUSA nod." - change this to and was featured in the First Team ALL-CUSA.
Done, changed to "...and was named to the All-CUSA First Team."
"He finished his collegiate career with 28 goals in 79 appearances." - this sentence needs to be cited to a reliable source.
Done, added reference to his New Mexico profile.
Seattle Sounders FC U-23
"Hansen turned out for Seattle Sounders FC U-23 in the Premier Development League." - played
Done, changed to recommendation.
Columbus Crew SC
"Hansen missed multiple matches during the summer" - How many matches exactly?
Done, changed to "Hansen missed 14 matches during the summer...}}
"then suffered a thigh strain" - and then
Done, changed to recommendation.
"He found his form in autumn," - How about mid to late 2018 to comply with
MOS:SEASON?
Done, changed to "He found his form in the later part of the year..."
Delink the second mention of Justin Meram in this section
Done, delinked the mention in the first sentence of the second paragraph.
References
References 34 and 35 need to have an access date for consistency with the other citations
Partially Done – added accessdate for the Soccerway profile, but
Template:MLS player does not take the accessdate parameter. I could format this as a standalone reference instead of using the template, if necessary?
@
MWright96: I've gone through and corrected just about all of your points. Just the one outstanding issue to address in the references, but other than that I think I've covered everything. I see that you've got six reviews currently out, so thanks for getting this one up as quickly as you did.
21.colinthompson (
talk)
19:23, 2 February 2019 (UTC)reply
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"He also appeared during the collegiate offseason with Seattle Sounders FC U-23." - He also appeared with Seattle Sounders FC U-23 during the collegiate offseason.
Done, changed to recommendation.
College and amateur
"Hansen also scored on his Conference USA debut, bagging a goal" - earning
Done, changed to "tallying a goal".
"Hansen also scored on his Conference USA debut" - put the acroynms of Conference USA in parentheses after its inital mention
Done
Wikilink the first mention of assist to
Assist (football) for non-Soccer readers
"he was named Third Team All-CUSA." - named to the
Done, changed to "he was named to the All-CUSA Third Team."
"but was named Second Team All-CUSA with final stats of three goals and three assists from 18 appearances." - , with a total of three goals and three assists from 18 appearances.
Done
"Hansen tallied a career-high 13 goals on the year" - during
Done
"and a First Team All-CUSA nod." - change this to and was featured in the First Team ALL-CUSA.
Done, changed to "...and was named to the All-CUSA First Team."
"He finished his collegiate career with 28 goals in 79 appearances." - this sentence needs to be cited to a reliable source.
Done, added reference to his New Mexico profile.
Seattle Sounders FC U-23
"Hansen turned out for Seattle Sounders FC U-23 in the Premier Development League." - played
Done, changed to recommendation.
Columbus Crew SC
"Hansen missed multiple matches during the summer" - How many matches exactly?
Done, changed to "Hansen missed 14 matches during the summer...}}
"then suffered a thigh strain" - and then
Done, changed to recommendation.
"He found his form in autumn," - How about mid to late 2018 to comply with
MOS:SEASON?
Done, changed to "He found his form in the later part of the year..."
Delink the second mention of Justin Meram in this section
Done, delinked the mention in the first sentence of the second paragraph.
References
References 34 and 35 need to have an access date for consistency with the other citations
Partially Done – added accessdate for the Soccerway profile, but
Template:MLS player does not take the accessdate parameter. I could format this as a standalone reference instead of using the template, if necessary?
@
MWright96: I've gone through and corrected just about all of your points. Just the one outstanding issue to address in the references, but other than that I think I've covered everything. I see that you've got six reviews currently out, so thanks for getting this one up as quickly as you did.
21.colinthompson (
talk)
19:23, 2 February 2019 (UTC)reply