This is a nice article, though I have a couple concerns, one major:
"The Spirit Squad instead attacked Michaels before the match had started, and Triple H came out to help them, Kenny disrespected him, leading to Triple H helping Michaels instead" Reword a bit, feels a little oddly worded though I get what you mean.
"Nemeth returned to OVW on January 17, 2007, at the television tapings, again using his Nick Nemeth ring name, along with Mike Mondo, formerly Mikey in the Spirit Squad, as the "Frat Pack"." OVW has television tapings now?
Reference 12 ("knee") is not working at the moment, and I don't think it ever worked since it was added. Other than that, I can not find any major concerns on this article, it looks good. --
EdgeNavidad (
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16:57, 23 February 2010 (UTC)reply
Thanks for the review. I apologise for the delay in responding to the review, but I have exams this week and am pretty snowed under. Anyway, I believe I've gotten to your comment, but it's somewhat difficult. Kenny and Mikey were the two more prominent members of the Squad (were in the tag title defenses, the main protaganists in the storylines, etc.) and most of the the influential moments of the Squad dealt mainly with Kenny and Mikey. Anyway, I think I've reduced the emphasis on them. Thanks again for the review. ♥
Nici♥
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Heart♥
19:10, 24 February 2010 (UTC)reply
This is a nice article, though I have a couple concerns, one major:
"The Spirit Squad instead attacked Michaels before the match had started, and Triple H came out to help them, Kenny disrespected him, leading to Triple H helping Michaels instead" Reword a bit, feels a little oddly worded though I get what you mean.
"Nemeth returned to OVW on January 17, 2007, at the television tapings, again using his Nick Nemeth ring name, along with Mike Mondo, formerly Mikey in the Spirit Squad, as the "Frat Pack"." OVW has television tapings now?
Reference 12 ("knee") is not working at the moment, and I don't think it ever worked since it was added. Other than that, I can not find any major concerns on this article, it looks good. --
EdgeNavidad (
talk)
16:57, 23 February 2010 (UTC)reply
Thanks for the review. I apologise for the delay in responding to the review, but I have exams this week and am pretty snowed under. Anyway, I believe I've gotten to your comment, but it's somewhat difficult. Kenny and Mikey were the two more prominent members of the Squad (were in the tag title defenses, the main protaganists in the storylines, etc.) and most of the the influential moments of the Squad dealt mainly with Kenny and Mikey. Anyway, I think I've reduced the emphasis on them. Thanks again for the review. ♥
Nici♥
Vampire♥
Heart♥
19:10, 24 February 2010 (UTC)reply