This article is in decent shape, but it needs more work before it becomes a Good Article.
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A. The prose is clear and concise, and the spelling and grammar are correct:
Done In the lead, "In In four career games", I believe you just need one "In".
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Done I have a question, in the Early years section, is the "Of" off "Gatorade Player Of The Year" supposed to be like that?
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Done In the Baseball career section, "He was called up to the Double-A Arkansas Travelers where he spent the 2007 season", does that sentence mean Adenhart played with them?
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Done Same section, "In in the month of April", one "In"?
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Done Same section, "The reaction to his second start was more positive, with coach Mike Scioscia", coach?
Done In the Baseball career section, "Adenhart was declared the best prospect in the Angels organization going into 2009, and was ranked 68th overall on Baseball America's 2009 prospects", isn't "Baseball America" supposed to be italicized?
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Done Since "Baseball America" is a magazine, you might as well have it in the "work" parameter.
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Done Also, "Orange County Register" and "Los Angeles Times", newspapers, should also be in the "work" format.
A. It contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with
the layout style guideline:
B.
Reliable sources are
cited inline. All content that
could reasonably be challenged, except for plot summaries and that which summarizes cited content elsewhere in the article, must be cited no later than the end of the paragraph (or line if the content is not in prose):
This article is in decent shape, but it needs more work before it becomes a Good Article.
Is it well written?
A. The prose is clear and concise, and the spelling and grammar are correct:
Done In the lead, "In In four career games", I believe you just need one "In".
Check.
Done I have a question, in the Early years section, is the "Of" off "Gatorade Player Of The Year" supposed to be like that?
Check.
Done In the Baseball career section, "He was called up to the Double-A Arkansas Travelers where he spent the 2007 season", does that sentence mean Adenhart played with them?
Check.
Done Same section, "In in the month of April", one "In"?
Check.
Done Same section, "The reaction to his second start was more positive, with coach Mike Scioscia", coach?
Done In the Baseball career section, "Adenhart was declared the best prospect in the Angels organization going into 2009, and was ranked 68th overall on Baseball America's 2009 prospects", isn't "Baseball America" supposed to be italicized?
Check.
Done Since "Baseball America" is a magazine, you might as well have it in the "work" parameter.
Check.
Done Also, "Orange County Register" and "Los Angeles Times", newspapers, should also be in the "work" format.
A. It contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with
the layout style guideline:
B.
Reliable sources are
cited inline. All content that
could reasonably be challenged, except for plot summaries and that which summarizes cited content elsewhere in the article, must be cited no later than the end of the paragraph (or line if the content is not in prose):