"to study English," — English literature? if so, write it that way.
It is never really specified.
"and earned him a BAFTA Rising Star Award nomination" — For which one? Single Man or COTT?
Wikilink "Dame" and "borough" for those who may not be aware of the terms.
I may be wrong but shouldn't the years during which these TV series were broadcasted be included?
Not really, the longevity is always changing and the years can be misleading as to how long the subject was a part of the series.
"when he starred, alongside Hugh Grant, in Chris and Paul Weitz's comedy-drama film About a Boy." — Add the year for About a Boy in the article's body
"ferociously bright and articulate but sexually confused sixth-former" — Who said this? Hoult or critics? Do clarify.
"Hoult's performance was poorly received by such film critics as Mary Pols, Justin Chang and Richard Roeper." — Wikilink Chang and Roeper. Pity Pols doesn't have her own wikipedia article.
"the "beautiful" scenery helped to tell story better." — "the "beautiful" scenery helped to tell the story better."
Wikilink critics who have wikipedia articles (example: Robbie Collin)
Write "Relativity" as "Relativity Media" and wikilink it.
The Prestige was a 2006 film, not a 2015 one.
Source Review
Archive Ref no. 39
Reformat Ref no. 6, 10, 77, 101, 102, 104, 105
The archived URL for Ref no. 104 shows "Error". Fix it or find another reference.
I've (hopefully) fixed everything
Ssven2. Thank you for taking a look.
VedantTalk 16:01, 6 March 2018 (UTC)reply
I still see the Bristol Post (Kaya Scodelario Maze Runner Preview one) shows "Error" for the archived URL. Fix it or find another reference. —
Ssven2Looking at you, kid 17:02, 6 March 2018 (UTC)reply
I am sorry for missing that, it must have been the numbering that confused me. I have removed the bit as it is isn't the most significant piece of information.
VedantTalk 17:12, 6 March 2018 (UTC)reply
"to study English," — English literature? if so, write it that way.
It is never really specified.
"and earned him a BAFTA Rising Star Award nomination" — For which one? Single Man or COTT?
Wikilink "Dame" and "borough" for those who may not be aware of the terms.
I may be wrong but shouldn't the years during which these TV series were broadcasted be included?
Not really, the longevity is always changing and the years can be misleading as to how long the subject was a part of the series.
"when he starred, alongside Hugh Grant, in Chris and Paul Weitz's comedy-drama film About a Boy." — Add the year for About a Boy in the article's body
"ferociously bright and articulate but sexually confused sixth-former" — Who said this? Hoult or critics? Do clarify.
"Hoult's performance was poorly received by such film critics as Mary Pols, Justin Chang and Richard Roeper." — Wikilink Chang and Roeper. Pity Pols doesn't have her own wikipedia article.
"the "beautiful" scenery helped to tell story better." — "the "beautiful" scenery helped to tell the story better."
Wikilink critics who have wikipedia articles (example: Robbie Collin)
Write "Relativity" as "Relativity Media" and wikilink it.
The Prestige was a 2006 film, not a 2015 one.
Source Review
Archive Ref no. 39
Reformat Ref no. 6, 10, 77, 101, 102, 104, 105
The archived URL for Ref no. 104 shows "Error". Fix it or find another reference.
I've (hopefully) fixed everything
Ssven2. Thank you for taking a look.
VedantTalk 16:01, 6 March 2018 (UTC)reply
I still see the Bristol Post (Kaya Scodelario Maze Runner Preview one) shows "Error" for the archived URL. Fix it or find another reference. —
Ssven2Looking at you, kid 17:02, 6 March 2018 (UTC)reply
I am sorry for missing that, it must have been the numbering that confused me. I have removed the bit as it is isn't the most significant piece of information.
VedantTalk 17:12, 6 March 2018 (UTC)reply