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Hi there Benny, I've been having a good look over the article and made a few changes for you. I think the subsection headings need some attention because they are a bit unconventional and inconsistent.
I hope all of this makes sense. I can help you with it but I don't want to impose a structure as it's really a matter of personal preference. Rodney Baggins ( talk) 11:39, 19 November 2019 (UTC)
It looks like Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ( talk • contribs) 14:46, 19 November 2019 (UTC)
Hi Benny, just a bit more feedback on the headings:
So in summary, you would have a 2007–2009 section, a 2010–2011 section, then separate sections for all the subsequent years starting with 2012. Watch this space for more comments later this evening... Rodney Baggins ( talk) 16:15, 21 November 2019 (UTC)
@ BennyOnTheLoose: I've made quite a few edits for you and hopefully most of it's fairly clear as I've tried to explain what I'm doing in the edit summaries. Some other things that have come to my attention:
I can help you with the sentence/paragraph restructuring but I don't want to tread on your toes if you prefer to go ahead and I can just copyedit again later. Rodney Baggins ( talk) 21:05, 21 November 2019 (UTC)
Hi Benny, I notice that the frame scores for the following matches are not included in the Notes:
Shouldn't they all be included for completeness? Also, why do you consider the semi-final scores to be notable for the 2007 IBSF U-21 World Championship (Note a.) and the 2009 IBSF World Championship (Note c.)? Rodney Baggins ( talk) 19:33, 24 November 2019 (UTC)
Re. this sentence in the 2017 section:
The playing time in the final was 8 hours and 4 minutes; it was the longest 11-frame competitive match in snooker, significantly exceeding the previous record of 7 hours and 14 minutes taken by Paul Tanner to defeat Robby Foldvari 6–5 at the 1992 UK Championship.
I've had a look at the 1992 UK snooker article and there's no mention of either Paul Tanner, Robby Foldvari, or a record long match. I can find no evidence of this fact, other than the citation you provided. I'm inclined to suspect that they were referring to the 1992 UK Billiards Championship (which Foldvari won). Is there any way you can check up on this? You might need to just miss out the bit about it exceeding an earlier record unless you can find out otherwise? The fact about the Tanner/Foldvari match time is also included in the 2017 World Women's Snooker Championship article. I think the Straits Times got it wrong. Or am I missing something? I don't think we should be comparing snooker matches with billiards matches! Rodney Baggins ( talk) 18:01, 29 November 2019 (UTC)
CC-BY-SA declaration; text in this section removed from the article by me; I'm leaving in here in case its removal breaks any references andd for future reference. It is irrelevant to the section i've removed it from. Baffle☿gab 02:37, 30 May 2020 (UTC)
Cue sports were not a part of the next Asian Games in 2014. [1]
There was no IBSF World Women's Snooker Championship in 2011. [2]
References
Baffle☿gab 02:37, 30 May 2020 (UTC)
The result was: promoted by
The Squirrel Conspiracy (
talk)
06:18, 23 June 2020 (UTC)
Improved to Good Article status by BennyOnTheLoose ( talk). Self-nominated at 01:08, 11 June 2020 (UTC).
Not sure why this article called her a former player since she is still actively playing on the main World Snooker Tour and Women's Tournaments. "Former professional player" implies she is no longer playing. I changed it so that it says "Ng On Yee is a professional snooker player." RetroSynth ( talk) 18:47, 13 February 2024 (UTC)
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Hi there Benny, I've been having a good look over the article and made a few changes for you. I think the subsection headings need some attention because they are a bit unconventional and inconsistent.
I hope all of this makes sense. I can help you with it but I don't want to impose a structure as it's really a matter of personal preference. Rodney Baggins ( talk) 11:39, 19 November 2019 (UTC)
It looks like Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ( talk • contribs) 14:46, 19 November 2019 (UTC)
Hi Benny, just a bit more feedback on the headings:
So in summary, you would have a 2007–2009 section, a 2010–2011 section, then separate sections for all the subsequent years starting with 2012. Watch this space for more comments later this evening... Rodney Baggins ( talk) 16:15, 21 November 2019 (UTC)
@ BennyOnTheLoose: I've made quite a few edits for you and hopefully most of it's fairly clear as I've tried to explain what I'm doing in the edit summaries. Some other things that have come to my attention:
I can help you with the sentence/paragraph restructuring but I don't want to tread on your toes if you prefer to go ahead and I can just copyedit again later. Rodney Baggins ( talk) 21:05, 21 November 2019 (UTC)
Hi Benny, I notice that the frame scores for the following matches are not included in the Notes:
Shouldn't they all be included for completeness? Also, why do you consider the semi-final scores to be notable for the 2007 IBSF U-21 World Championship (Note a.) and the 2009 IBSF World Championship (Note c.)? Rodney Baggins ( talk) 19:33, 24 November 2019 (UTC)
Re. this sentence in the 2017 section:
The playing time in the final was 8 hours and 4 minutes; it was the longest 11-frame competitive match in snooker, significantly exceeding the previous record of 7 hours and 14 minutes taken by Paul Tanner to defeat Robby Foldvari 6–5 at the 1992 UK Championship.
I've had a look at the 1992 UK snooker article and there's no mention of either Paul Tanner, Robby Foldvari, or a record long match. I can find no evidence of this fact, other than the citation you provided. I'm inclined to suspect that they were referring to the 1992 UK Billiards Championship (which Foldvari won). Is there any way you can check up on this? You might need to just miss out the bit about it exceeding an earlier record unless you can find out otherwise? The fact about the Tanner/Foldvari match time is also included in the 2017 World Women's Snooker Championship article. I think the Straits Times got it wrong. Or am I missing something? I don't think we should be comparing snooker matches with billiards matches! Rodney Baggins ( talk) 18:01, 29 November 2019 (UTC)
CC-BY-SA declaration; text in this section removed from the article by me; I'm leaving in here in case its removal breaks any references andd for future reference. It is irrelevant to the section i've removed it from. Baffle☿gab 02:37, 30 May 2020 (UTC)
Cue sports were not a part of the next Asian Games in 2014. [1]
There was no IBSF World Women's Snooker Championship in 2011. [2]
References
Baffle☿gab 02:37, 30 May 2020 (UTC)
The result was: promoted by
The Squirrel Conspiracy (
talk)
06:18, 23 June 2020 (UTC)
Improved to Good Article status by BennyOnTheLoose ( talk). Self-nominated at 01:08, 11 June 2020 (UTC).
Not sure why this article called her a former player since she is still actively playing on the main World Snooker Tour and Women's Tournaments. "Former professional player" implies she is no longer playing. I changed it so that it says "Ng On Yee is a professional snooker player." RetroSynth ( talk) 18:47, 13 February 2024 (UTC)