I know the article is brief but the lead looks a little short to me still.
What's an "interchange station"?
"in the planning area" what's a planning area?
"Exit B of Newton MRT station." no full stop required.
I would lose one of the images, they're not exactly unique to this station - right now the references are crushed up on my screen because of the image under the infobox.
"US$20.16 " one decimal place for conversions.
"Bus, Taxi" taxi
"Depth 12 metres (39 ft) (North South line platforms)" what about the Downtown line?
Addressed most of the issues above. "Planning area" refers more to a constituent district in Singapore, but I find it irrelevant so I removed it. Also cited for parking, but I don't see how it can be in the body (too trivial to be in there). Also worked on the station design.--
ZKang123 (
talk)
00:52, 13 March 2021 (UTC)reply
I know the article is brief but the lead looks a little short to me still.
What's an "interchange station"?
"in the planning area" what's a planning area?
"Exit B of Newton MRT station." no full stop required.
I would lose one of the images, they're not exactly unique to this station - right now the references are crushed up on my screen because of the image under the infobox.
"US$20.16 " one decimal place for conversions.
"Bus, Taxi" taxi
"Depth 12 metres (39 ft) (North South line platforms)" what about the Downtown line?
Addressed most of the issues above. "Planning area" refers more to a constituent district in Singapore, but I find it irrelevant so I removed it. Also cited for parking, but I don't see how it can be in the body (too trivial to be in there). Also worked on the station design.--
ZKang123 (
talk)
00:52, 13 March 2021 (UTC)reply