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Reviewer: Status ( talk · contribs) 02:21, 28 June 2012 (UTC) reply

Pseudo-dead link. The server in Albany, NY that hosts this page shuts down at night. It is usually up all day during the day. Mitch32( There is a destiny that makes us... family.) 08:18, 30 June 2012 (UTC) reply
Oh, yes. You told me about that previously. Forgot about that. Statυs ( talk) 08:43, 30 June 2012 (UTC) reply
  • It connects to two major expressways, the New York State Thruway (Interstate 90 or I-90) and the Southern Expressway (US 219), by way of interchanges. --> It connects to two major expressways: the New York State Thruway (Interstate 90 or I-90) and the Southern Expressway (US 219) by way of interchanges.
  • Thus it is very busy not only at rush hours but also after Buffalo Bills' home football games, due to its proximity to Ralph Wilson Stadium. --> Thus it is very busy not only at rush hours, but also after Buffalo Bills' home football games due to its proximity to Ralph Wilson Stadium.
  • NY 179 is the only state highway that intersects with all three U.S. Highways (20, 62 and 219) in the Buffalo area. --> shouldn't be all on its lonesome. One sentence doesn't make a paragraph.

Statυs ( talk) 08:00, 30 June 2012 (UTC) reply

Done on the rest. Mitch32( There is a destiny that makes us... family.) 08:18, 30 June 2012 (UTC) reply
  • All issues have been addressed. Passing the article! Great work! Statυs ( talk) 08:43, 30 June 2012 (UTC) reply
From Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia

GA Review

Article ( | visual edit | history) · Article talk ( | history) · Watch

Reviewer: Status ( talk · contribs) 02:21, 28 June 2012 (UTC) reply

Pseudo-dead link. The server in Albany, NY that hosts this page shuts down at night. It is usually up all day during the day. Mitch32( There is a destiny that makes us... family.) 08:18, 30 June 2012 (UTC) reply
Oh, yes. You told me about that previously. Forgot about that. Statυs ( talk) 08:43, 30 June 2012 (UTC) reply
  • It connects to two major expressways, the New York State Thruway (Interstate 90 or I-90) and the Southern Expressway (US 219), by way of interchanges. --> It connects to two major expressways: the New York State Thruway (Interstate 90 or I-90) and the Southern Expressway (US 219) by way of interchanges.
  • Thus it is very busy not only at rush hours but also after Buffalo Bills' home football games, due to its proximity to Ralph Wilson Stadium. --> Thus it is very busy not only at rush hours, but also after Buffalo Bills' home football games due to its proximity to Ralph Wilson Stadium.
  • NY 179 is the only state highway that intersects with all three U.S. Highways (20, 62 and 219) in the Buffalo area. --> shouldn't be all on its lonesome. One sentence doesn't make a paragraph.

Statυs ( talk) 08:00, 30 June 2012 (UTC) reply

Done on the rest. Mitch32( There is a destiny that makes us... family.) 08:18, 30 June 2012 (UTC) reply
  • All issues have been addressed. Passing the article! Great work! Statυs ( talk) 08:43, 30 June 2012 (UTC) reply

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