Character section is too long. Either split it off into a list or compile it into 1-2 short paragraphs. The plot could also use some minor trimming, but it's not as bad.
A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have
fair use rationales:
B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with
suitable captions:
Overall:
Pass or Fail:
This article is close to GA level. Fix the sourcing issue for episode list and do something with the characters and plot and it should be good to go.
じんない20:24, 13 January 2009 (UTC)reply
Thanks for your review. Please give me at least three days; I'll re-structure Plot and Characters—showing you different versions as needed—then the sources. Sales info is non-existent even in the (very rare) Perfect Guides; I've seen only
this(in Japanese) fairly comprehensive, non-
reliable fansite barely mention (in paragraph 2) that rental figures started well for the first episodes before dropping off for later ones.
The changes are good enough. The descriptions seem a bit wordy, but not enough to prevent the nomination. You should consider getting it peer reviewed by someone from
WP:PRV though as well.
じんない19:41, 14 January 2009 (UTC)reply
I'll send it to the reviewers another day, as there are other articles and things I want to attend to. Thanks again for your review! --
anoddname20:05, 14 January 2009 (UTC)reply
Character section is too long. Either split it off into a list or compile it into 1-2 short paragraphs. The plot could also use some minor trimming, but it's not as bad.
A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have
fair use rationales:
B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with
suitable captions:
Overall:
Pass or Fail:
This article is close to GA level. Fix the sourcing issue for episode list and do something with the characters and plot and it should be good to go.
じんない20:24, 13 January 2009 (UTC)reply
Thanks for your review. Please give me at least three days; I'll re-structure Plot and Characters—showing you different versions as needed—then the sources. Sales info is non-existent even in the (very rare) Perfect Guides; I've seen only
this(in Japanese) fairly comprehensive, non-
reliable fansite barely mention (in paragraph 2) that rental figures started well for the first episodes before dropping off for later ones.
The changes are good enough. The descriptions seem a bit wordy, but not enough to prevent the nomination. You should consider getting it peer reviewed by someone from
WP:PRV though as well.
じんない19:41, 14 January 2009 (UTC)reply
I'll send it to the reviewers another day, as there are other articles and things I want to attend to. Thanks again for your review! --
anoddname20:05, 14 January 2009 (UTC)reply