Lead: "he joined Ebbsfleet United, with who he played in the FA Trophy Final in 2008." --> "he joined Ebbsfleet United, and played for them in the 2008 FA Trophy Final".
Career: "Barrett started his career with the Chelsea youth system"; should it not be "Barrett started his career in the Chelsea youth system" or "Barrett started his career with the Chelsea youth team"?
Career: "he made a "surprise" return in a 1–1 draw with Burton Albion." - How soon after he was injured was this? i.e. if he was expected to be out for six weeks, how long was he actually out?
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Having searched myself, I don't think that's there's any more information that is available for inclusion in the Personal life section unfortunately. I would encourage you to do periodical checks though, as more information could become available. Since the article now covers his personal life, albeit not in great detail, the article does now cover all major aspects of what I would expect to find in an article about a footballer.
As a result, since I couldn't find any other problems, this article is now a
good article.
Lead: "he joined Ebbsfleet United, with who he played in the FA Trophy Final in 2008." --> "he joined Ebbsfleet United, and played for them in the 2008 FA Trophy Final".
Career: "Barrett started his career with the Chelsea youth system"; should it not be "Barrett started his career in the Chelsea youth system" or "Barrett started his career with the Chelsea youth team"?
Career: "he made a "surprise" return in a 1–1 draw with Burton Albion." - How soon after he was injured was this? i.e. if he was expected to be out for six weeks, how long was he actually out?
I am placing this article on hold for seven days to allow you to fix the problems listed. If the work is completed before then, I will pass the article before the seven days are up. If no attempts are made to correct the problems, I will fail the article in seven days. If you are not finished within the seven days, I have no problem in extending the hold period to allow you to finish, as long as I see work is being carried out on the article.
To make it easier for me to see how much work has been done, please either strike each comment when the problem has been fixed or post a note underneath each item saying it is completed.
Feel free request to clarification on anything; you can leave comments on my talk page or here, as I have this page watchlisted.
Having searched myself, I don't think that's there's any more information that is available for inclusion in the Personal life section unfortunately. I would encourage you to do periodical checks though, as more information could become available. Since the article now covers his personal life, albeit not in great detail, the article does now cover all major aspects of what I would expect to find in an article about a footballer.
As a result, since I couldn't find any other problems, this article is now a
good article.