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Capitalization, double mentioning, perhaps dates of performances would help as well. That whole recently added section needs a tweak. -- zero faults |sockpuppets| 19:46, 14 June 2006 (UTC)
This is just a listy stub. There is very little useful content here. Can't some news articles about the group be found? How does the group operate? Who runs it? Who has directed these pieces? How are they selected? How do the children audition, etc. -- Ssilvers ( talk) 13:56, 3 September 2008 (UTC)
Is it a fact that they are the leading organisation? — Preceding unsigned comment added by 86.154.171.217 ( talk • contribs) 13:36, 4 September 2008
The promotional tone, unsourced passages, and likely copyright violations are a long term concern. Much of this appears to stem from a WP:SPA, Jezza264 [1], though anonymous IPs have lent a hand as well. No attempt by Jezza to explain edits, nor clarify possible relationship to the subject. Cleanup overdue. 99.11.4.60 ( talk) 00:18, 5 July 2012 (UTC)
There are multiple additions from http://www.nymt.org.uk/history/history.html in the history of this article and added at different times. It has now become a derivative work and revision deletion may be very complicated and impractical. I have blanked the article and re-listed it at Wikipedia:Copyright problems/2012 July 13. Note if any of the editors here have permission from the website to have used this material it must be properly documented before the article can be unblanked. Follow the instructions on the template now blanking the article under Can you help resolve this issue?. Click on "Show" for each option to see what needs to be done. Voceditenore ( talk) 17:10, 13 July 2012 (UTC)
Thanks, again Voceditenore. Very helpful and constructive. Future plans/events, if known and reported elsewhere, could, however, be encyclopedic (encyclopaedia = compendium of knowledge and N.B. information). This page might be an example: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/2012_Summer_Olympics. But I take your point! Jezza264 ( talk) 23:31, 15 July 2012 (UTC)
I have completely re-written the article at Talk:National Youth Music Theatre/Temp. In a couple of days, an adminstrator will move this into the main article space, delete the versions containing copyvio or derivatives of it, and merge the two histories. Voceditenore ( talk) 18:18, 16 July 2012 (UTC)
Jezza264, most of the changes you made last night were minor improvements to the prose and typo correction, which are acceptable. However, I reverted the way you listed Prince Edward in the Infobox per the Wikipedia Manual of Style for Biographies. Save the "H.R.H." etc. for your website if that's how you wish to style him. The other change I reverted was typical of editors with a conflict of interest. You changed: "Over the years, the NYMT stayed afloat with..." to Over the years, the NYMT thrived with..." I have now changed it to "Over the years, the NYMT's main funding came from...". Save the "thrive" for your own website and press releases.
You are the self-admitted Producer of the NYMT. Once again, I'm asking you to please read the guidelines at Wikipedia:Conflict of interest and abide by them scrupulously. You need to propose any substantive change of wording or tone or any addition of new material here on the talk page, for non-involved editors to consider. They will make the changes if appropriate. Do not make them yourself, and do not treat this article as an extension of your website. Voceditenore ( talk) 07:03, 21 July 2012 (UTC)
Please could you remove Matthew Bourne from the list of former members? This is referenced by Andrew Girvan in Whatsonstage [5] but is not accurate. Jezza264 ( talk) 10:02, 21 July 2012 (UTC)
Indeed and agreed. That is what I meant when I said that I would ask them to remove it from the article on the NYMT's (not my) website. And it has now been done. I was thanking you for drawing it to my attention. Matthew Bourne does not appear in the list of alumni on the official website page: [6] but he was incorrectly sited within an article from 2008 on the website by Jeremy James Taylor from which you, apparently, extracted your facts. That has now been corrected on the NYMT's website. Indebted. Jezza264 ( talk) 21:21, 21 July 2012 (UTC)
Voceditenore, in order to bring the chapter up to the present, please would you add that the American composer, lyricist and playwright Jason Robert Brown collaborated with the NYMT to produce the West End première of his musical 13, which Brown also directed at The Apollo, Shaftesbury Avenue in August 2012? The company also produced his first musical theatre piece, Songs for a New World at the Bridewell Theatre, directed by Sarah Redmond, who had appeared in the UK première of the work in the same theatre. For references, I'd suggest Mark Shenton's review of 13 [7] and, for Songs for a New World, Ken Plummer's review here: [8]. The poster image for 13 may be found here: [9]. With thanks Jezza264 ( talk) 13:01, 7 October 2012 (UTC)
Dear Voceditenore, I note that Richard Stilgoe has been added to the alumni list. He wrote Bodywork for the NYMT, as mentioned in the reference given, and he also served as a trustee, but he is not an alumnus. Please would you remove? It has also been brought to my attention that the following alumni are conspiciously missing from the list: Zoe Birkett, Robin Blaze, Stephen Graham (actor), Sally Hawkins, Toby Jones and Simon Thomas (television presenter). With many thanks. Jezza264 ( talk) 23:19, 26 November 2012 (UTC)
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Capitalization, double mentioning, perhaps dates of performances would help as well. That whole recently added section needs a tweak. -- zero faults |sockpuppets| 19:46, 14 June 2006 (UTC)
This is just a listy stub. There is very little useful content here. Can't some news articles about the group be found? How does the group operate? Who runs it? Who has directed these pieces? How are they selected? How do the children audition, etc. -- Ssilvers ( talk) 13:56, 3 September 2008 (UTC)
Is it a fact that they are the leading organisation? — Preceding unsigned comment added by 86.154.171.217 ( talk • contribs) 13:36, 4 September 2008
The promotional tone, unsourced passages, and likely copyright violations are a long term concern. Much of this appears to stem from a WP:SPA, Jezza264 [1], though anonymous IPs have lent a hand as well. No attempt by Jezza to explain edits, nor clarify possible relationship to the subject. Cleanup overdue. 99.11.4.60 ( talk) 00:18, 5 July 2012 (UTC)
There are multiple additions from http://www.nymt.org.uk/history/history.html in the history of this article and added at different times. It has now become a derivative work and revision deletion may be very complicated and impractical. I have blanked the article and re-listed it at Wikipedia:Copyright problems/2012 July 13. Note if any of the editors here have permission from the website to have used this material it must be properly documented before the article can be unblanked. Follow the instructions on the template now blanking the article under Can you help resolve this issue?. Click on "Show" for each option to see what needs to be done. Voceditenore ( talk) 17:10, 13 July 2012 (UTC)
Thanks, again Voceditenore. Very helpful and constructive. Future plans/events, if known and reported elsewhere, could, however, be encyclopedic (encyclopaedia = compendium of knowledge and N.B. information). This page might be an example: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/2012_Summer_Olympics. But I take your point! Jezza264 ( talk) 23:31, 15 July 2012 (UTC)
I have completely re-written the article at Talk:National Youth Music Theatre/Temp. In a couple of days, an adminstrator will move this into the main article space, delete the versions containing copyvio or derivatives of it, and merge the two histories. Voceditenore ( talk) 18:18, 16 July 2012 (UTC)
Jezza264, most of the changes you made last night were minor improvements to the prose and typo correction, which are acceptable. However, I reverted the way you listed Prince Edward in the Infobox per the Wikipedia Manual of Style for Biographies. Save the "H.R.H." etc. for your website if that's how you wish to style him. The other change I reverted was typical of editors with a conflict of interest. You changed: "Over the years, the NYMT stayed afloat with..." to Over the years, the NYMT thrived with..." I have now changed it to "Over the years, the NYMT's main funding came from...". Save the "thrive" for your own website and press releases.
You are the self-admitted Producer of the NYMT. Once again, I'm asking you to please read the guidelines at Wikipedia:Conflict of interest and abide by them scrupulously. You need to propose any substantive change of wording or tone or any addition of new material here on the talk page, for non-involved editors to consider. They will make the changes if appropriate. Do not make them yourself, and do not treat this article as an extension of your website. Voceditenore ( talk) 07:03, 21 July 2012 (UTC)
Please could you remove Matthew Bourne from the list of former members? This is referenced by Andrew Girvan in Whatsonstage [5] but is not accurate. Jezza264 ( talk) 10:02, 21 July 2012 (UTC)
Indeed and agreed. That is what I meant when I said that I would ask them to remove it from the article on the NYMT's (not my) website. And it has now been done. I was thanking you for drawing it to my attention. Matthew Bourne does not appear in the list of alumni on the official website page: [6] but he was incorrectly sited within an article from 2008 on the website by Jeremy James Taylor from which you, apparently, extracted your facts. That has now been corrected on the NYMT's website. Indebted. Jezza264 ( talk) 21:21, 21 July 2012 (UTC)
Voceditenore, in order to bring the chapter up to the present, please would you add that the American composer, lyricist and playwright Jason Robert Brown collaborated with the NYMT to produce the West End première of his musical 13, which Brown also directed at The Apollo, Shaftesbury Avenue in August 2012? The company also produced his first musical theatre piece, Songs for a New World at the Bridewell Theatre, directed by Sarah Redmond, who had appeared in the UK première of the work in the same theatre. For references, I'd suggest Mark Shenton's review of 13 [7] and, for Songs for a New World, Ken Plummer's review here: [8]. The poster image for 13 may be found here: [9]. With thanks Jezza264 ( talk) 13:01, 7 October 2012 (UTC)
Dear Voceditenore, I note that Richard Stilgoe has been added to the alumni list. He wrote Bodywork for the NYMT, as mentioned in the reference given, and he also served as a trustee, but he is not an alumnus. Please would you remove? It has also been brought to my attention that the following alumni are conspiciously missing from the list: Zoe Birkett, Robin Blaze, Stephen Graham (actor), Sally Hawkins, Toby Jones and Simon Thomas (television presenter). With many thanks. Jezza264 ( talk) 23:19, 26 November 2012 (UTC)
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