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Can you please explain me what to change on the article? English is not my first language, and i'm still not good enough to distinguish between them.
For example, "3 December 2012" is British English, and "December 3, 2012" is American. And on the article you are using both, please choose only one.
The song was well received by contemporary music critics → Link
music critics
Done
In an interview published on Fréttablaðið the singer stated → Put a comma after "Fréttablaðið"
Done
The project, called Biophilia comprises → The same as above for "Biophilia"
Done
and to be including a series of workshops for children[8] in collaboration with local schools. → Put the ref at the end of the phrase.
Done
"Mutual Core" has a subtitle, announced live at the Manchester International Festival performances, which is "Tectonic plates, chords". The subtitle refers to the physical phenomena related to the song and to musical resources also related to this physical phenomena. Moreover, every song on Biophilia has a characteristic color, featured on the album artwork and in the apps, and every tuning fork contained in the Ultimate Art Edition is also painted in the colour of the track. The color of "Mutual Core" is brown. → Where is the reference?
Other 2 remixes of "Crystalline" and "Sacrifice" → I think "Other two remixes" sounds better.
According to Mark Pytlik of Pitchfork → It is not a printed publication
Done
Same for Popmatters.
Done
"Mutual Core" was described as "best" and "climactic" by Helen Brown of Telegraph.co.uk → "Mutual Core" was described as "best" and "climactic" by Helen Brown of The Daily Telegraph
Done
"literally volcanic" by Heather Phares of AllMusic → "literally volcanic" by Heather Phares of Allmusic and it is not a printed publication
Done
Consequence of Sound is not a printed publication
Done
Andy Gill of The Independent gave a negative review of the album, praising only the choral elements, stating that: "they’re a constant delight as she reflects upon her desire for the "dangerous gifts" of elemental nature, the lightning-flash of creative inspiration ("Thunderbolt") ; muses about being a bead threaded upon a DNA chain ("Hollow") ; explores the ethically neutral, natural attraction of parasite to host ("Virus") ; admires the creative force of volcanic energy ("Mutual Core")".[35] → Remove all spaces before these semicolons.
Done
wearing a golden dress (by Michael van der Ham)[44], → put the comma before the ref
Done
What Matters, Myspace, The Verge, Flavorwire, CraveOnline, io9 and Ology are not printed publications. Remove the italics of them
Done
while Gary Pini of Papermag → The correct is Paper
It's been over three weeks since the nomination was put on hold, and I don't see any activity on the article or here. Perhaps the review should be closed soon?
BlueMoonset (
talk)
23:31, 1 April 2013 (UTC)reply
The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.
The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.
Can you please explain me what to change on the article? English is not my first language, and i'm still not good enough to distinguish between them.
For example, "3 December 2012" is British English, and "December 3, 2012" is American. And on the article you are using both, please choose only one.
The song was well received by contemporary music critics → Link
music critics
Done
In an interview published on Fréttablaðið the singer stated → Put a comma after "Fréttablaðið"
Done
The project, called Biophilia comprises → The same as above for "Biophilia"
Done
and to be including a series of workshops for children[8] in collaboration with local schools. → Put the ref at the end of the phrase.
Done
"Mutual Core" has a subtitle, announced live at the Manchester International Festival performances, which is "Tectonic plates, chords". The subtitle refers to the physical phenomena related to the song and to musical resources also related to this physical phenomena. Moreover, every song on Biophilia has a characteristic color, featured on the album artwork and in the apps, and every tuning fork contained in the Ultimate Art Edition is also painted in the colour of the track. The color of "Mutual Core" is brown. → Where is the reference?
Other 2 remixes of "Crystalline" and "Sacrifice" → I think "Other two remixes" sounds better.
According to Mark Pytlik of Pitchfork → It is not a printed publication
Done
Same for Popmatters.
Done
"Mutual Core" was described as "best" and "climactic" by Helen Brown of Telegraph.co.uk → "Mutual Core" was described as "best" and "climactic" by Helen Brown of The Daily Telegraph
Done
"literally volcanic" by Heather Phares of AllMusic → "literally volcanic" by Heather Phares of Allmusic and it is not a printed publication
Done
Consequence of Sound is not a printed publication
Done
Andy Gill of The Independent gave a negative review of the album, praising only the choral elements, stating that: "they’re a constant delight as she reflects upon her desire for the "dangerous gifts" of elemental nature, the lightning-flash of creative inspiration ("Thunderbolt") ; muses about being a bead threaded upon a DNA chain ("Hollow") ; explores the ethically neutral, natural attraction of parasite to host ("Virus") ; admires the creative force of volcanic energy ("Mutual Core")".[35] → Remove all spaces before these semicolons.
Done
wearing a golden dress (by Michael van der Ham)[44], → put the comma before the ref
Done
What Matters, Myspace, The Verge, Flavorwire, CraveOnline, io9 and Ology are not printed publications. Remove the italics of them
Done
while Gary Pini of Papermag → The correct is Paper
It's been over three weeks since the nomination was put on hold, and I don't see any activity on the article or here. Perhaps the review should be closed soon?
BlueMoonset (
talk)
23:31, 1 April 2013 (UTC)reply
The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.