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Reviewer: IDV ( talk · contribs) 21:56, 2 June 2016 (UTC)
I'll be doing this one.-- IDV talk 21:56, 2 June 2016 (UTC)
I don't work on music articles often, so this might be obvious to you, but it's not to me.
Additional arrangements were done by Shigeo Tamaru.[8] Despite her previous work as lead composer on Super Mario RPG, Parasite Eve became her breakout project and garnered her international fame."Her" is meant to refer to Shimomura, but it sounds like it refers to Tamaru since he is the last person mentioned.
During her work on Parasite Eve, Shimomura spent time in America,Change to "in the United States".
Until Parasite Eve, Shimomura and written musicShimomura had written music
Later, due to popular demand from fans, a reprint was issued through the Square Enix label on January 26, 2011Is "later" necessary?
with the aim to both strike at players' emotions while not interfering with them.Because you use "while", it doesn't seem like "both" is needed.
Arrangements for multiple tracks was done by Hiroshi Nakajima,Arrangements [...] were done
When she started out, she knew nothing about the game's story, but eventually became familiar with thembecame familar with it
For the game's theme song, the company collaborated withThis is Square Enix, right? Might want to just write "Square Enix" since they haven't been mentioned for a while
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Judgesurreal777: This article is pretty good! I couldn't find much wrong with it at all actually, just a couple of wording issues. I'll put this article
On hold for seven days; if the issues and questions are all addressed within that time, I'll pass the article.--
IDV
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09:47, 3 June 2016 (UTC)
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Reviewer: IDV ( talk · contribs) 21:56, 2 June 2016 (UTC)
I'll be doing this one.-- IDV talk 21:56, 2 June 2016 (UTC)
I don't work on music articles often, so this might be obvious to you, but it's not to me.
Additional arrangements were done by Shigeo Tamaru.[8] Despite her previous work as lead composer on Super Mario RPG, Parasite Eve became her breakout project and garnered her international fame."Her" is meant to refer to Shimomura, but it sounds like it refers to Tamaru since he is the last person mentioned.
During her work on Parasite Eve, Shimomura spent time in America,Change to "in the United States".
Until Parasite Eve, Shimomura and written musicShimomura had written music
Later, due to popular demand from fans, a reprint was issued through the Square Enix label on January 26, 2011Is "later" necessary?
with the aim to both strike at players' emotions while not interfering with them.Because you use "while", it doesn't seem like "both" is needed.
Arrangements for multiple tracks was done by Hiroshi Nakajima,Arrangements [...] were done
When she started out, she knew nothing about the game's story, but eventually became familiar with thembecame familar with it
For the game's theme song, the company collaborated withThis is Square Enix, right? Might want to just write "Square Enix" since they haven't been mentioned for a while
@
Judgesurreal777: This article is pretty good! I couldn't find much wrong with it at all actually, just a couple of wording issues. I'll put this article
On hold for seven days; if the issues and questions are all addressed within that time, I'll pass the article.--
IDV
talk
09:47, 3 June 2016 (UTC)