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There seems to be general confusion about the location of Deer Island. It is not part of Winthrop. It is part of Boston. The area to the north is Winthrop. A channel once separated Deer Island from the mainland, and that is the boundary line between Boston and Winthrop. Go to Google Maps and enter Winthrop, MA and Boston, MA into the search box and see the boundaries clearly delineated. Bellczar ( talk) 06:39, 28 July 2015 (UTC)
@ Gourami Watcher: Should it be pointed in the article that once again, forensic facial artists made the recon of a female victim a lot more idealised/prettier/cuter than the human reality? see also Delta Dawn where the latest facial recon has turned her into a contestant in the America's Most Beautiful Baby pageant. Paul Benjamin Austin ( talk) 12:30, 19 September 2015 (UTC)
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I will take on this review. This is a great article, well referenced and highly detailed. I mostly have nitpicks about the prose. Here are some to start out, more to follow.
Nice work so far Gourami Watcher, I'm eager to see what you do with it! delldot ∇. 08:41, 2 February 2016 (UTC)
I ended up removing the statement about "no tips resulting in finding the identity, etc.," since she has now been identified and two subjects are awaiting trial. I have moved the statements regarding the "undocumented" theory and where "police were focused on the local community" after the sentence about the unreported missing part. I looked through the rest of the article and changed the tense. I forgot to do so earlier, since the page was created while Bella was still unidentified. -- GouramiWatcher Talk 17:14, 2 February 2016 (UTC)
Great Gourami Watcher, thanks for the lightning fast response! I'm still combing through the prose, making a lot of edits myself. Feel free to revert anything that accidentally introduces inaccuracies. Here's another batch of just prose stuff:
Progress looks good so far! I'll be back with more soon. delldot ∇. 19:54, 2 February 2016 (UTC)
Lightning fast again! More prose stuff, this does involve more reorganization more.
More to follow. Hope this bit-by-bit review is not driving you nuts. Getting closer though! delldot ∇. 22:05, 2 February 2016 (UTC)
Nice work so far. I'll let you keep working on the organization stuff, but might as well add this next set of comments. Especially since I'm asking for more info, so it might be easier to add that first then do the more cope edity stuff.
Well I'm finally to the bottom of the article! I'll probably give the whole thing a final read-through after this round. Thanks for all the hard work so far! delldot ∇. 02:21, 3 February 2016 (UTC)
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Rachelle Bond has pleaded guilty to accessory to murder in exchange for time served, and to testify against her ex-boyfriend. [2] - Knowledgekid87 ( talk) 00:16, 11 February 2017 (UTC)
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There seems to be general confusion about the location of Deer Island. It is not part of Winthrop. It is part of Boston. The area to the north is Winthrop. A channel once separated Deer Island from the mainland, and that is the boundary line between Boston and Winthrop. Go to Google Maps and enter Winthrop, MA and Boston, MA into the search box and see the boundaries clearly delineated. Bellczar ( talk) 06:39, 28 July 2015 (UTC)
@ Gourami Watcher: Should it be pointed in the article that once again, forensic facial artists made the recon of a female victim a lot more idealised/prettier/cuter than the human reality? see also Delta Dawn where the latest facial recon has turned her into a contestant in the America's Most Beautiful Baby pageant. Paul Benjamin Austin ( talk) 12:30, 19 September 2015 (UTC)
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I will take on this review. This is a great article, well referenced and highly detailed. I mostly have nitpicks about the prose. Here are some to start out, more to follow.
Nice work so far Gourami Watcher, I'm eager to see what you do with it! delldot ∇. 08:41, 2 February 2016 (UTC)
I ended up removing the statement about "no tips resulting in finding the identity, etc.," since she has now been identified and two subjects are awaiting trial. I have moved the statements regarding the "undocumented" theory and where "police were focused on the local community" after the sentence about the unreported missing part. I looked through the rest of the article and changed the tense. I forgot to do so earlier, since the page was created while Bella was still unidentified. -- GouramiWatcher Talk 17:14, 2 February 2016 (UTC)
Great Gourami Watcher, thanks for the lightning fast response! I'm still combing through the prose, making a lot of edits myself. Feel free to revert anything that accidentally introduces inaccuracies. Here's another batch of just prose stuff:
Progress looks good so far! I'll be back with more soon. delldot ∇. 19:54, 2 February 2016 (UTC)
Lightning fast again! More prose stuff, this does involve more reorganization more.
More to follow. Hope this bit-by-bit review is not driving you nuts. Getting closer though! delldot ∇. 22:05, 2 February 2016 (UTC)
Nice work so far. I'll let you keep working on the organization stuff, but might as well add this next set of comments. Especially since I'm asking for more info, so it might be easier to add that first then do the more cope edity stuff.
Well I'm finally to the bottom of the article! I'll probably give the whole thing a final read-through after this round. Thanks for all the hard work so far! delldot ∇. 02:21, 3 February 2016 (UTC)
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Rachelle Bond has pleaded guilty to accessory to murder in exchange for time served, and to testify against her ex-boyfriend. [2] - Knowledgekid87 ( talk) 00:16, 11 February 2017 (UTC)
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