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Morphsuits trio urge tax changes to help growth http://business.scotsman.com/retail/Morphsuits-trio-urge-tax-changes.6838087.jp
Morphsuit madness at Drayton Manor http://www.sundaymercury.net/news/midlands-news/2011/05/07/morphsuit-madness-at-drayton-manor-66331-28653097/
Flagging some patriotic fashion http://www.heraldsun.com.au/ipad/flagging-some-patriotic-fashion/story-fn6bfmgc-1225992966594
Don't be fooled: April 1 is Swatch Zebra Day at Rockwell Mall http://www.philstar.com/Article.aspx?articleId=671114&publicationSubCategoryId=83
http://www.ayus-zentai.com/forum/showthread.php?740-Morphsuits-General-Feedback
Dress to impress this Halloween http://www.mediasearch.com.au/fashion/wrap/morphsuits-halloween
Friends morph into potential tycoons http://www.thisismoney.co.uk/money/article-1706816/Friends-morph-into-potential-tycoons.html
http://www.facebook.com/topic.php?uid=121309431246644&topic=294
Mighty Morphsuit power rages on the street http://www.theage.com.au/national/mighty-morphsuit-power-rages-on-the-street-20100911-1561u.html
Music festival fashion morphs into mystery http://www.news.com.au/entertainment/music/music-festival-fashion-morphs-into-mystery/story-e6frfn0r-1225993543982 https://www.companiesintheuk.co.uk/company/documentextract/45673795 http://levelbusiness.com/doc/company/uk/SC323753 http://www.cdrex.com/afg-media-ltd-203699.html http://www.ey.com/Publication/vwLUAssets/EoY_-_Scotland_award_recipients/$FILE/EY_EOY_Scotland_award_recipients.pdf
Marvels in Morphsuits http://www.bq-magazine.co.uk/entrepreneur/scot/marvels-in-morphsuits/
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The article fails to note the founding date of the company (the BBC article would point it as 2009). Are there any criticisms over their products? I understand that as a recent company, it has comparatively less attention and history than more established companies; as such, the article may not be "broad" in coverage in terms of WP:WIAGA, but this article cab be improved by polishing the language and presentation. Jappalang ( talk) 03:05, 6 December 2011 (UTC)
With regards to this edit, most of which was reverted, the positive, mainstream publicity zentai received through usage of non-Morphsuit outfits is forever linked to the success of the Morphsuit brand. I'm sorry, it just is, and this content needs to stay. -- Zanimum ( talk) 18:45, 25 March 2012 (UTC)
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It looks like several revisions ago, this article was recreated at Morphsuit, which had previously redirected here. Any differences in content should be incorporated into this article, since it's the company's proper name.
Furthermore, because of past redirects, Talk:Morphsuit redirects to Talk:Zentai; that should be be cleaned up as well. I'm guessing there might be some other funky bits with these three articles and their talk pages and mismatched redirects, with possibly some other pages involved as well, because this isn't the first time I've seen something like this; but I'm not able to do any investigating or fixing myself, right now. B7T ( talk)
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I'll review this. Mike Christie ( talk - contribs - library) 13:55, 28 January 2018 (UTC)
I'll copyedit as I go; please revert as needed.
They are working on a womenswear line: This is cited to a 2012 source; I'd either remove this or, if you can bring it up to date, give current details, along with an "As of 2018" qualifier. And doesn't this duplicate "Expansion plans include...female-targeted accessories"? The same thing applies to that sentence in any case, since that's a 2011 source.
As of August 2011, there were 40 varieties, and 50 as of September 2011: rather than having two old data points, can we have a current data point?
As of April 2013, stated it expected: something is wrong here.
With their investment from BFG: this is phrased as though the reader already knows about the investment, whcih is not the case. And who is BFG?
As of May 2011, it claimed to be the world's largest fancy dress brand: I think this sort of claim is probably best omitted without a better source; I understand that the article just says they claim it, but it's not really a notable fact unless it's true, in which case we need a better source.
The company expect sales of £309,980 in October 2012.
The brand has tried to distance itself from the term zentai, and the concept of fetish usagenear the end of the article, which comes as a surprise. Can we explain the issue before we give the solution? E.g. "Zentai suits are sometimes associated with spandex fetishism, and the brand has tried to distance itself from this concept", assuming that we can source the first part of that statement reliably.
Overall this is quite a long way from GA, and I doubt it can be fixed in the time frame of a GA review. However, you've been waiting a long time for the review, so I'll place the article on hold until you get a chance to respond. Mike Christie ( talk - contribs - library) 14:41, 28 January 2018 (UTC)
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Morphsuits trio urge tax changes to help growth http://business.scotsman.com/retail/Morphsuits-trio-urge-tax-changes.6838087.jp
Morphsuit madness at Drayton Manor http://www.sundaymercury.net/news/midlands-news/2011/05/07/morphsuit-madness-at-drayton-manor-66331-28653097/
Flagging some patriotic fashion http://www.heraldsun.com.au/ipad/flagging-some-patriotic-fashion/story-fn6bfmgc-1225992966594
Don't be fooled: April 1 is Swatch Zebra Day at Rockwell Mall http://www.philstar.com/Article.aspx?articleId=671114&publicationSubCategoryId=83
http://www.ayus-zentai.com/forum/showthread.php?740-Morphsuits-General-Feedback
Dress to impress this Halloween http://www.mediasearch.com.au/fashion/wrap/morphsuits-halloween
Friends morph into potential tycoons http://www.thisismoney.co.uk/money/article-1706816/Friends-morph-into-potential-tycoons.html
http://www.facebook.com/topic.php?uid=121309431246644&topic=294
Mighty Morphsuit power rages on the street http://www.theage.com.au/national/mighty-morphsuit-power-rages-on-the-street-20100911-1561u.html
Music festival fashion morphs into mystery http://www.news.com.au/entertainment/music/music-festival-fashion-morphs-into-mystery/story-e6frfn0r-1225993543982 https://www.companiesintheuk.co.uk/company/documentextract/45673795 http://levelbusiness.com/doc/company/uk/SC323753 http://www.cdrex.com/afg-media-ltd-203699.html http://www.ey.com/Publication/vwLUAssets/EoY_-_Scotland_award_recipients/$FILE/EY_EOY_Scotland_award_recipients.pdf
Marvels in Morphsuits http://www.bq-magazine.co.uk/entrepreneur/scot/marvels-in-morphsuits/
This peer review discussion has been closed.
Looking to worth this article into shape, looking for advice. Thanks! --
Zanimum (
talk)
15:31, 25 November 2011 (UTC)
Lede
History
Corporate
Marketing
The article fails to note the founding date of the company (the BBC article would point it as 2009). Are there any criticisms over their products? I understand that as a recent company, it has comparatively less attention and history than more established companies; as such, the article may not be "broad" in coverage in terms of WP:WIAGA, but this article cab be improved by polishing the language and presentation. Jappalang ( talk) 03:05, 6 December 2011 (UTC)
With regards to this edit, most of which was reverted, the positive, mainstream publicity zentai received through usage of non-Morphsuit outfits is forever linked to the success of the Morphsuit brand. I'm sorry, it just is, and this content needs to stay. -- Zanimum ( talk) 18:45, 25 March 2012 (UTC)
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Cheers.— cyberbot II Talk to my owner:Online 03:37, 26 February 2016 (UTC)
It looks like several revisions ago, this article was recreated at Morphsuit, which had previously redirected here. Any differences in content should be incorporated into this article, since it's the company's proper name.
Furthermore, because of past redirects, Talk:Morphsuit redirects to Talk:Zentai; that should be be cleaned up as well. I'm guessing there might be some other funky bits with these three articles and their talk pages and mismatched redirects, with possibly some other pages involved as well, because this isn't the first time I've seen something like this; but I'm not able to do any investigating or fixing myself, right now. B7T ( talk)
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Reviewer: Mike Christie ( talk · contribs) 13:55, 28 January 2018 (UTC)
I'll review this. Mike Christie ( talk - contribs - library) 13:55, 28 January 2018 (UTC)
I'll copyedit as I go; please revert as needed.
They are working on a womenswear line: This is cited to a 2012 source; I'd either remove this or, if you can bring it up to date, give current details, along with an "As of 2018" qualifier. And doesn't this duplicate "Expansion plans include...female-targeted accessories"? The same thing applies to that sentence in any case, since that's a 2011 source.
As of August 2011, there were 40 varieties, and 50 as of September 2011: rather than having two old data points, can we have a current data point?
As of April 2013, stated it expected: something is wrong here.
With their investment from BFG: this is phrased as though the reader already knows about the investment, whcih is not the case. And who is BFG?
As of May 2011, it claimed to be the world's largest fancy dress brand: I think this sort of claim is probably best omitted without a better source; I understand that the article just says they claim it, but it's not really a notable fact unless it's true, in which case we need a better source.
The company expect sales of £309,980 in October 2012.
The brand has tried to distance itself from the term zentai, and the concept of fetish usagenear the end of the article, which comes as a surprise. Can we explain the issue before we give the solution? E.g. "Zentai suits are sometimes associated with spandex fetishism, and the brand has tried to distance itself from this concept", assuming that we can source the first part of that statement reliably.
Overall this is quite a long way from GA, and I doubt it can be fixed in the time frame of a GA review. However, you've been waiting a long time for the review, so I'll place the article on hold until you get a chance to respond. Mike Christie ( talk - contribs - library) 14:41, 28 January 2018 (UTC)