The lead is full of sources, which per
MOS:LEADCITE ought to not be there. Parts like "a little bit came from the" and "between addiction of drug, sexual freedom and beauty of life that refers New Wave film" breach the prose criteria.
Overall: Immediate fail. It doesn't even look like the nominator paid attention to
step 1 of the instructions.
Cognissonance (
talk) 07:50, 19 January 2018 (UTC)reply
The lead is full of sources, which per
MOS:LEADCITE ought to not be there. Parts like "a little bit came from the" and "between addiction of drug, sexual freedom and beauty of life that refers New Wave film" breach the prose criteria.
Overall: Immediate fail. It doesn't even look like the nominator paid attention to
step 1 of the instructions.
Cognissonance (
talk) 07:50, 19 January 2018 (UTC)reply