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Zwerg Nase (
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12:35, 11 September 2015 (UTC)
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I will review this.
Zwerg Nase (
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12:35, 11 September 2015 (UTC)
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- It is reasonably well written.
- a (prose):
b (
MoS for
lead,
layout,
word choice,
fiction, and
lists):
- It is factually accurate and
verifiable.
- a (
reference section):
b (citations to
reliable sources):
c (
OR):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (
major aspects):
b (
focused):
- It follows the
neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by
images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have
fair use rationales):
b (
appropriate use with
suitable captions):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
Just a couple of minor things here:
- Background: In the second paragraph, you speak of him making a third record. Isn't it his second?
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Blowin' Your Mind! was his first,
Astral Weeks his second.
Dan56 (
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10:50, 20 September 2015 (UTC)
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- Music and lyrics: sense of intense intimacy is not NPOV. It also sounds like a quote. If it is, give it as such.
- I attributed that phrase to the author of the source,
Brian Hinton.
Dan56 (
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10:50, 20 September 2015 (UTC)
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- Same goes for largely impenetrable.
- Attributed.
Dan56 (
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10:50, 20 September 2015 (UTC)
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- Release and reception: End of second paragraph: Is LP in small letters in the source?
- Yes, but it should be allowed under
WP:MOS to capitalize them anyway.
Dan56 (
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10:50, 20 September 2015 (UTC)
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- You should give sources for track listing and personnel. I guess that can be found on the album's booklet?
- Done, @
Zwerg Nase:
Dan56 (
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10:50, 20 September 2015 (UTC)
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That's about it. I give the nominator(s) seven days to adress the issues. Good job so far!
Zwerg Nase (
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09:04, 20 September 2015 (UTC)
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- Looks good, it's a pass :)
Zwerg Nase (
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11:27, 20 September 2015 (UTC)
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