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Reviewer: MarioSoulTruthFan ( talk · contribs) 10:54, 8 May 2021 (UTC)
The lead needs to be expanded, as it is a summary of the whole article. Doesn't reference live performances, elaborate more charts and not only american ones, describe the music video in a sentence or two. Hot Alternative Songs, and Hot Rap Songs charts are mentioned here and are component charts so shouldn't be used. Double platinum and the certification said it was four times platium? You can also add other countries te song was certified. On the same section, "became a commercial success worldwide" → use various countries instead of worldwide as there are seeral countries that don't have a chart
On the Background and promotion section the release history should also be added, maybe create a new section so you can include the personnel as well. The Reception section is a disgrace, there are away more reviews 1, 2 and 3. You can also improve the article in various sections with these sources, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8 and 9 This was on a quick serch.
Personnel needs {{
en dash}}
and the songwriters? How are they on the infobox and not here. The charts need a caption saying "Weekly chart positions for Mood", similar for Year-end charts. The
full credits for the personnel. The music video could use some expasion and re-written, use more sources such as
1.
The Commercial performance setion needs to be re-written entirely, adding new charts and certifications and the component charts I mentioned above removed. The Live performances could be further described see 1, 2 and 3. There is more available online. The Cover versions could be merged on the live performances section, re-title "Live performances and cover versions".
Regarding the remix and its infobox, did it charted anywhere? I'm sure it did. This section also needs to be expanded, there is more information available online, see 1, 2 and 3 as examples. The References are missing author, dates, accessdates, work and other parameters. There are aslo some questionable sources such as Headline Planet and duplicate sources.
All in all, you barely worked on the article to get it to GA. No one would be able to expad this in one week and re-work everything, not even in a month. This is not even close to GA criteria, as it doesn't comply with the manual of style guidelines for lead sections, layout, words to watch, fiction, and list incorporation, not all inline citations are from reliable sources nor all references are presented in accordance with the layout style guideline. Furthermore, it is not broad in its coverage and it could use a sample of the song or iamge to ilustrate. It fails four of the six criteria, I'm sorry but this is a Quickfail. It happens on the first GA's, take a look at FA and other GA articles to get a good grasp of the criteria first. MarioSoulTruthFan ( talk) 12:25, 8 May 2021 (UTC)
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Reviewer: MarioSoulTruthFan ( talk · contribs) 10:54, 8 May 2021 (UTC)
The lead needs to be expanded, as it is a summary of the whole article. Doesn't reference live performances, elaborate more charts and not only american ones, describe the music video in a sentence or two. Hot Alternative Songs, and Hot Rap Songs charts are mentioned here and are component charts so shouldn't be used. Double platinum and the certification said it was four times platium? You can also add other countries te song was certified. On the same section, "became a commercial success worldwide" → use various countries instead of worldwide as there are seeral countries that don't have a chart
On the Background and promotion section the release history should also be added, maybe create a new section so you can include the personnel as well. The Reception section is a disgrace, there are away more reviews 1, 2 and 3. You can also improve the article in various sections with these sources, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8 and 9 This was on a quick serch.
Personnel needs {{
en dash}}
and the songwriters? How are they on the infobox and not here. The charts need a caption saying "Weekly chart positions for Mood", similar for Year-end charts. The
full credits for the personnel. The music video could use some expasion and re-written, use more sources such as
1.
The Commercial performance setion needs to be re-written entirely, adding new charts and certifications and the component charts I mentioned above removed. The Live performances could be further described see 1, 2 and 3. There is more available online. The Cover versions could be merged on the live performances section, re-title "Live performances and cover versions".
Regarding the remix and its infobox, did it charted anywhere? I'm sure it did. This section also needs to be expanded, there is more information available online, see 1, 2 and 3 as examples. The References are missing author, dates, accessdates, work and other parameters. There are aslo some questionable sources such as Headline Planet and duplicate sources.
All in all, you barely worked on the article to get it to GA. No one would be able to expad this in one week and re-work everything, not even in a month. This is not even close to GA criteria, as it doesn't comply with the manual of style guidelines for lead sections, layout, words to watch, fiction, and list incorporation, not all inline citations are from reliable sources nor all references are presented in accordance with the layout style guideline. Furthermore, it is not broad in its coverage and it could use a sample of the song or iamge to ilustrate. It fails four of the six criteria, I'm sorry but this is a Quickfail. It happens on the first GA's, take a look at FA and other GA articles to get a good grasp of the criteria first. MarioSoulTruthFan ( talk) 12:25, 8 May 2021 (UTC)