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Reviewer: Nikki 311 04:03, 27 June 2010 (UTC) reply

I am sorry to inform the editors of this article that I am quickfailing its Good Article nomination based on the cleanup tag located in the article (additional citations needed). However, I am going to give some suggestions for improvement. Please feel free to renominate when the issues have been addressed.

  • The additional citations banner needs to be addressed and then removed.
  • Per WP:LEAD, the lead needs to be a little bit longer and summarize all the main points of the article.
  • All citation needed tags need to be fixed.
  • A lot of the sections are short or merely lists. These sections need expanded prose. Culture and sports could be expanded a lot.
  • All local people need a citation.

Good luck with the article. :) Nikki 311 04:03, 27 June 2010 (UTC) reply

From Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia

GA Review

Article ( | visual edit | history) · Article talk ( | history) · Watch

Reviewer: Nikki 311 04:03, 27 June 2010 (UTC) reply

I am sorry to inform the editors of this article that I am quickfailing its Good Article nomination based on the cleanup tag located in the article (additional citations needed). However, I am going to give some suggestions for improvement. Please feel free to renominate when the issues have been addressed.

  • The additional citations banner needs to be addressed and then removed.
  • Per WP:LEAD, the lead needs to be a little bit longer and summarize all the main points of the article.
  • All citation needed tags need to be fixed.
  • A lot of the sections are short or merely lists. These sections need expanded prose. Culture and sports could be expanded a lot.
  • All local people need a citation.

Good luck with the article. :) Nikki 311 04:03, 27 June 2010 (UTC) reply


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