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Reviewer: Ruby2010 comment! 01:35, 13 June 2011 (UTC)
I'm concerned that the production section only focuses on the opening sequence and not the rest of the episode. Making the episode is something the DVD audio commentaries would discuss.
I'll place the review on hold for seven days while my comments get addressed. Please reply here when you have finished, as I won't be watching the actual article for edits. Thanks and good luck, Ruby2010 comment! 02:09, 13 June 2011 (UTC)
I fixed everythng except what I mentioned above. Thanks, Guy546( Talk) 21:13, 17 June 2011 (UTC)
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Reviewer: Ruby2010 comment! 01:35, 13 June 2011 (UTC)
I'm concerned that the production section only focuses on the opening sequence and not the rest of the episode. Making the episode is something the DVD audio commentaries would discuss.
I'll place the review on hold for seven days while my comments get addressed. Please reply here when you have finished, as I won't be watching the actual article for edits. Thanks and good luck, Ruby2010 comment! 02:09, 13 June 2011 (UTC)
I fixed everythng except what I mentioned above. Thanks, Guy546( Talk) 21:13, 17 June 2011 (UTC)