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I'm starting to enjoy reviewing these U2 articles; they're really exemplary work. I'll get on this soon.
Reviewer: Lampman ( talk) 10:32, 5 April 2010 (UTC)
I've been there with my cell phone (shouldn't it be mobile phones, by the way?), and it's truly a great song. The article is well referenced and well written, there's just a couple of minor issues. First of all, the lead is really too short for an article this size. It should probably be about twice as long; there is nothing on "Composition" and "Live performances", and there could probably be a couple of lines more on "Writing and recording" and "Reception" as well. I also question the wisdom of a single-sentence paragraph at the end of the "Live performances" section. Apart from this it should be ready to go. Lampman ( talk) 04:51, 6 April 2010 (UTC)
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I'm starting to enjoy reviewing these U2 articles; they're really exemplary work. I'll get on this soon.
Reviewer: Lampman ( talk) 10:32, 5 April 2010 (UTC)
I've been there with my cell phone (shouldn't it be mobile phones, by the way?), and it's truly a great song. The article is well referenced and well written, there's just a couple of minor issues. First of all, the lead is really too short for an article this size. It should probably be about twice as long; there is nothing on "Composition" and "Live performances", and there could probably be a couple of lines more on "Writing and recording" and "Reception" as well. I also question the wisdom of a single-sentence paragraph at the end of the "Live performances" section. Apart from this it should be ready to go. Lampman ( talk) 04:51, 6 April 2010 (UTC)