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Reviewer: Averroes82 ( talk · contribs) 00:43, 18 December 2017 (UTC)
Listed among his accomplishments is the so called "purge", although it is an extrajudicial power grab with use of torture. [1] Averroes82 ( talk) 00:43, 18 December 2017 (UTC)
I researched this further and found more human rights crimes [3] [4] [5] [6] and War Crimes [7] [8] [9] serious enough to not be undermined by whitewashing throughout the article in rush for GA. @ Emir of Wikipedia: Since it's an article about a controversial living person, more care should be applied to neutrality standards. Averroes82 ( talk) 00:07, 19 December 2017 (UTC)
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I'll take over this review, as it has been effectively abandoned. Mike Christie ( talk - contribs - library) 01:39, 27 February 2018 (UTC)
At this time, Mohammad bin Salman began to rise from one position to another such as secretary-general of the Riyadh Competitive Council, special advisor to the chairman of the board for the King Abdulaziz Foundation for Research and Archives, and a member of the board of trustees for Albir Society in the Riyadh region: The source doesn't say this; it just lists these positions. I'm a bit doubtful about the reliability of the source, to be honest; it's essentially self-published, since it's his foundation, but for the simple facts about positions he held it's probably OK.
n October 2011, Crown Prince Sultan bin Abdulaziz died, and the current King Salman began his ascent to power by becoming second deputy prime minister and defense minister in November 2011 and making Mohammad bin Salman his private advisor.The source does not say this.
This is an alarming list of issues, given how little of the article I've gone through to find them. I picked another source, more or less at random: footnote 43, [3], is used to cite "In Yemen, the political unrest (which began escalating in 2011) rapidly became a major issue for the newly appointed Minister of Defense, with rebel Houthis taking control of northern Yemen in late 2014, followed by President Abdrabbuh Mansur Hadi and his cabinet’s resignation. Mohammad bin Salman’s first move as minister was to mobilize a pan-GCC coalition to intervene following a series of suicide bombings in Sanaa via air strikes against Houthis, and impose a naval blockade". Mohammad bin Salman is not mentioned on this page.
I'm afraid I'm going to fail this immediately. The article needs to be thoroughly gone through to find and fix problems like this, and GA is not the place to do it. Mike Christie ( talk - contribs - library) 02:37, 27 February 2018 (UTC)
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Reviewer: Averroes82 ( talk · contribs) 00:43, 18 December 2017 (UTC)
Listed among his accomplishments is the so called "purge", although it is an extrajudicial power grab with use of torture. [1] Averroes82 ( talk) 00:43, 18 December 2017 (UTC)
I researched this further and found more human rights crimes [3] [4] [5] [6] and War Crimes [7] [8] [9] serious enough to not be undermined by whitewashing throughout the article in rush for GA. @ Emir of Wikipedia: Since it's an article about a controversial living person, more care should be applied to neutrality standards. Averroes82 ( talk) 00:07, 19 December 2017 (UTC)
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I'll take over this review, as it has been effectively abandoned. Mike Christie ( talk - contribs - library) 01:39, 27 February 2018 (UTC)
At this time, Mohammad bin Salman began to rise from one position to another such as secretary-general of the Riyadh Competitive Council, special advisor to the chairman of the board for the King Abdulaziz Foundation for Research and Archives, and a member of the board of trustees for Albir Society in the Riyadh region: The source doesn't say this; it just lists these positions. I'm a bit doubtful about the reliability of the source, to be honest; it's essentially self-published, since it's his foundation, but for the simple facts about positions he held it's probably OK.
n October 2011, Crown Prince Sultan bin Abdulaziz died, and the current King Salman began his ascent to power by becoming second deputy prime minister and defense minister in November 2011 and making Mohammad bin Salman his private advisor.The source does not say this.
This is an alarming list of issues, given how little of the article I've gone through to find them. I picked another source, more or less at random: footnote 43, [3], is used to cite "In Yemen, the political unrest (which began escalating in 2011) rapidly became a major issue for the newly appointed Minister of Defense, with rebel Houthis taking control of northern Yemen in late 2014, followed by President Abdrabbuh Mansur Hadi and his cabinet’s resignation. Mohammad bin Salman’s first move as minister was to mobilize a pan-GCC coalition to intervene following a series of suicide bombings in Sanaa via air strikes against Houthis, and impose a naval blockade". Mohammad bin Salman is not mentioned on this page.
I'm afraid I'm going to fail this immediately. The article needs to be thoroughly gone through to find and fix problems like this, and GA is not the place to do it. Mike Christie ( talk - contribs - library) 02:37, 27 February 2018 (UTC)