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Reviewer: AirshipJungleman29 ( talk · contribs) 15:24, 2 August 2023 (UTC)
I'll take this. This review will be used in the WikiCup and the current backlog drive—please consider participating in either. ~~ AirshipJungleman29 ( talk) 15:24, 2 August 2023 (UTC)
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Having read through the article for the spotchecks, it is clear that the prose is substandard for GA. We can do one of two things—(1) you do a copyedit and when you are done ping me and I'll decide to pass or fail or (2) I fail this nomination now, you submit the article to WP:GOCE, and return it afterwards to WP:GAN. ~~ AirshipJungleman29 ( talk) 10:00, 9 August 2023 (UTC)
These are obviously only of sources I can access, Amir Ghandi. ~~ AirshipJungleman29 ( talk) 10:00, 9 August 2023 (UTC)
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Reviewer: AirshipJungleman29 ( talk · contribs) 15:24, 2 August 2023 (UTC)
I'll take this. This review will be used in the WikiCup and the current backlog drive—please consider participating in either. ~~ AirshipJungleman29 ( talk) 15:24, 2 August 2023 (UTC)
GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria
Having read through the article for the spotchecks, it is clear that the prose is substandard for GA. We can do one of two things—(1) you do a copyedit and when you are done ping me and I'll decide to pass or fail or (2) I fail this nomination now, you submit the article to WP:GOCE, and return it afterwards to WP:GAN. ~~ AirshipJungleman29 ( talk) 10:00, 9 August 2023 (UTC)
These are obviously only of sources I can access, Amir Ghandi. ~~ AirshipJungleman29 ( talk) 10:00, 9 August 2023 (UTC)
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