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Reviewer: Al Ameer son ( talk · contribs) 19:58, 6 April 2019 (UTC)
I will be reviewing this article shortly. I gave it a read-through earlier and it looks good from the outset. -- Al Ameer ( talk) 20:04, 6 April 2019 (UTC)
@ LouisAragon: After a few read-throughs, I’ve been hard-pressed to find issues with the article’s prose or comprehensiveness. Though it is short and I’m not too familiar with Safavid history, the article certainly appears to fully cover the interesting career of this Safavid official. It would be good to have known what happened to him after 1583 and how and when he died, but after working on several articles about contemporary Ottoman officials with similar multi-faceted careers (i.e. governors/generals/diplomats), I know it’s very difficult sometimes to find this information. Please address the above points whenever you can and I’ll do a spot-check when I’m in front of my computer. Otherwise, I’ll see if there’s anything else that needs to be addressed. Very good work with this article. — Al Ameer ( talk) 14:59, 7 April 2019 (UTC)
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Reviewer: Al Ameer son ( talk · contribs) 19:58, 6 April 2019 (UTC)
I will be reviewing this article shortly. I gave it a read-through earlier and it looks good from the outset. -- Al Ameer ( talk) 20:04, 6 April 2019 (UTC)
@ LouisAragon: After a few read-throughs, I’ve been hard-pressed to find issues with the article’s prose or comprehensiveness. Though it is short and I’m not too familiar with Safavid history, the article certainly appears to fully cover the interesting career of this Safavid official. It would be good to have known what happened to him after 1583 and how and when he died, but after working on several articles about contemporary Ottoman officials with similar multi-faceted careers (i.e. governors/generals/diplomats), I know it’s very difficult sometimes to find this information. Please address the above points whenever you can and I’ll do a spot-check when I’m in front of my computer. Otherwise, I’ll see if there’s anything else that needs to be addressed. Very good work with this article. — Al Ameer ( talk) 14:59, 7 April 2019 (UTC)
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