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Overall, great article. However, the Context section needs something; maybe go a little further about the country in which Jalil mainly worked in. I enjoyed you Reactions section because you included how the groups used media to create propaganda and that reading materials were cheaper because of the expanded mass market. Also in that section, you might want to delete "stuff" (in the very last line). It sounds very informal. Mkclements1 ( talk) 18:30, 11 November 2013 (UTC)
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Overall, great article. However, the Context section needs something; maybe go a little further about the country in which Jalil mainly worked in. I enjoyed you Reactions section because you included how the groups used media to create propaganda and that reading materials were cheaper because of the expanded mass market. Also in that section, you might want to delete "stuff" (in the very last line). It sounds very informal. Mkclements1 ( talk) 18:30, 11 November 2013 (UTC)
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