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Reviewer: LM150 ( talk · contribs) 14:07, 7 March 2021 (UTC)
Hi, happy to review this for GA. Thanks for your efforts so far - here are my comments/feedback.
More comments to follow, thanks LM150 14:07, 7 March 2021 (UTC)
Done
Thanks, LM150 18:21, 8 March 2021 (UTC)
Update - additional comments may come soon before wrapping this up. I haven't forgotten about this review. Thanks, LM150 18:30, 9 April 2021 (UTC)
Hi @ Trillfendi:, just coming back to this review. I'm happy to make a few copyedits once all the above has been addressed. Also, perhaps cleanup the personal life section? The quote about her sexuality - I don't think that's relevant or adds anything here (Wikipedia is not gossip!). I would perhaps remove the subheading "Relationships" as you address legal issues here too. Thanks. LM150 13:30, 8 May 2021 (UTC)
Trillfendi, apologies but I'm going to fail this GA for now. Let me know when you're ready to renominate and I'll review it again. Thank you! LM150 17:56, 28 May 2021 (UTC)
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Reviewer: LM150 ( talk · contribs) 14:07, 7 March 2021 (UTC)
Hi, happy to review this for GA. Thanks for your efforts so far - here are my comments/feedback.
More comments to follow, thanks LM150 14:07, 7 March 2021 (UTC)
Done
Thanks, LM150 18:21, 8 March 2021 (UTC)
Update - additional comments may come soon before wrapping this up. I haven't forgotten about this review. Thanks, LM150 18:30, 9 April 2021 (UTC)
Hi @ Trillfendi:, just coming back to this review. I'm happy to make a few copyedits once all the above has been addressed. Also, perhaps cleanup the personal life section? The quote about her sexuality - I don't think that's relevant or adds anything here (Wikipedia is not gossip!). I would perhaps remove the subheading "Relationships" as you address legal issues here too. Thanks. LM150 13:30, 8 May 2021 (UTC)
Trillfendi, apologies but I'm going to fail this GA for now. Let me know when you're ready to renominate and I'll review it again. Thank you! LM150 17:56, 28 May 2021 (UTC)