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Reviewer: Sammi Brie ( talk · contribs) 04:24, 20 January 2023 (UTC)
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Welcome to GAN,
Derpytoucan! There are some tweaks to be made throughout in copy. I have some sourcing concerns with the blockquote, which appears to combine several quoted passages incorrectly if you don't have the report, and with the information on his claim of exoneration. Solid start, and I'm giving you 7 days to get it together. Ping me when all the requested changes have been made.
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04:24, 20 January 2023 (UTC)
Observations:
I also ran IABot to archive the references. Some of the links were dead. Since Internet Archive archives most new links added to Wikipedia, these can typically be recovered. This is generally a recommendation I make to reviewers, but I did so here in order to access some of the sources.
Four references were chosen for spot checks:
There are two images in the article, one from the Konstantin von Wedelstaedt collection (for which we have permission to use) and an Aeroprints image we also have permission to use. Both have appropriate permission tickets in VRT on the Commons side. They also both have captions.
These items are not required by GA specification but are encouraged as good practices.
The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.
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Reviewer: Sammi Brie ( talk · contribs) 04:24, 20 January 2023 (UTC)
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Welcome to GAN,
Derpytoucan! There are some tweaks to be made throughout in copy. I have some sourcing concerns with the blockquote, which appears to combine several quoted passages incorrectly if you don't have the report, and with the information on his claim of exoneration. Solid start, and I'm giving you 7 days to get it together. Ping me when all the requested changes have been made.
Sammi Brie (she/her •
t •
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04:24, 20 January 2023 (UTC)
Observations:
I also ran IABot to archive the references. Some of the links were dead. Since Internet Archive archives most new links added to Wikipedia, these can typically be recovered. This is generally a recommendation I make to reviewers, but I did so here in order to access some of the sources.
Four references were chosen for spot checks:
There are two images in the article, one from the Konstantin von Wedelstaedt collection (for which we have permission to use) and an Aeroprints image we also have permission to use. Both have appropriate permission tickets in VRT on the Commons side. They also both have captions.
These items are not required by GA specification but are encouraged as good practices.