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Some of the language and phrasing here needs to be revamped. I want to include a better explanation about how personalized urls and direct-mail advertising work. If you have any issues with direct phrasing or tone, please list them so they can be addressed. Jadeddissonance ( talk) 07:14, 3 May 2008 (UTC)
Quite a few problems:
-- Mr. Z-man 21:39, 3 May 2008 (UTC)
This seems rather press release-ish. There's no indication that MindFire is known for it's philanthropy in any way. I'm not clear why we'd have this section in an encyclopedia article. -- SiobhanHansa 22:43, 19 August 2008 (UTC)
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Some of the language and phrasing here needs to be revamped. I want to include a better explanation about how personalized urls and direct-mail advertising work. If you have any issues with direct phrasing or tone, please list them so they can be addressed. Jadeddissonance ( talk) 07:14, 3 May 2008 (UTC)
Quite a few problems:
-- Mr. Z-man 21:39, 3 May 2008 (UTC)
This seems rather press release-ish. There's no indication that MindFire is known for it's philanthropy in any way. I'm not clear why we'd have this section in an encyclopedia article. -- SiobhanHansa 22:43, 19 August 2008 (UTC)
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