"For me, the movement is something that represents, like, taking over the world."[8]" not verbatim from the source
Cyrus says this piece in the video attached, should I find a reference that says that quote in text?
"Footage" is mentioned in the article but the reference only mentions "pictures". footage is particularly cinema or film.
Done
Ref for breakup with Hemsworth
"the track itself charted lower than expected" who expected?
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What is a "more mixed review"?
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"Kia Makarechi from The Huffington Post was critical of the decision to avoid mentioning Hemsworth and toning-down of the criticism she received after the MTV Video Music Awards" "she" refers to: 1) Hemsworth, 2) Makarechi, or 3) Cyrus? I suppose the third…
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"years' past." years past?
Done
"In its original broadcast in the United States on October 2, 2013, Miley: The Movement was watched by approximately 1.6 million viewers; in doing so, it earned a 0.8 rating in the 18–49 demographic." awkward wording, "in doing so" is used, although nothing was "done". could you rephrase?
Two images are used, one appropriately licensed through flickr; the other, non-free, image has a valid FUR. Captions are suitable and demonstrate the images' relevance to the article.
Aside from that one note above that I have a question on, I believe I've answered all of your comments. Thanks so much for your time, I appreciate it!
WikiRedactor (
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17:45, 25 April 2014 (UTC)reply
The discrepancy was, I believe, just a matter of using "the" instead of "a". Should be straightforward to address. C67917:57, 25 April 2014 (UTC)reply
"For me, the movement is something that represents, like, taking over the world."[8]" not verbatim from the source
Cyrus says this piece in the video attached, should I find a reference that says that quote in text?
"Footage" is mentioned in the article but the reference only mentions "pictures". footage is particularly cinema or film.
Done
Ref for breakup with Hemsworth
"the track itself charted lower than expected" who expected?
Done
What is a "more mixed review"?
Done
"Kia Makarechi from The Huffington Post was critical of the decision to avoid mentioning Hemsworth and toning-down of the criticism she received after the MTV Video Music Awards" "she" refers to: 1) Hemsworth, 2) Makarechi, or 3) Cyrus? I suppose the third…
Done
"years' past." years past?
Done
"In its original broadcast in the United States on October 2, 2013, Miley: The Movement was watched by approximately 1.6 million viewers; in doing so, it earned a 0.8 rating in the 18–49 demographic." awkward wording, "in doing so" is used, although nothing was "done". could you rephrase?
Two images are used, one appropriately licensed through flickr; the other, non-free, image has a valid FUR. Captions are suitable and demonstrate the images' relevance to the article.
Aside from that one note above that I have a question on, I believe I've answered all of your comments. Thanks so much for your time, I appreciate it!
WikiRedactor (
talk)
17:45, 25 April 2014 (UTC)reply
The discrepancy was, I believe, just a matter of using "the" instead of "a". Should be straightforward to address. C67917:57, 25 April 2014 (UTC)reply