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Overall it's well cited and seems to be complete with relevant information. Tighten up the lead a little and insure that all the refs cited still work and that they help to convey what the article attributes to them. Also refs needed checked for
original research.
I'll wait a week to see if there's additional comments and whether the few minor issues are resolved. Also I'd like verification of the refs (for verifiability, see WP:V). Nja247 ( talk • contribs) 21:10, 15 November 2008 (UTC) reply
Ok. Thanks for reviewing, I'll start going through your comments now. ♥ Nici♥ Vampire♥ Heart♥ 21:33, 15 November 2008 (UTC) reply
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Overall it's well cited and seems to be complete with relevant information. Tighten up the lead a little and insure that all the refs cited still work and that they help to convey what the article attributes to them. Also refs needed checked for
original research.
I'll wait a week to see if there's additional comments and whether the few minor issues are resolved. Also I'd like verification of the refs (for verifiability, see WP:V). Nja247 ( talk • contribs) 21:10, 15 November 2008 (UTC) reply
Ok. Thanks for reviewing, I'll start going through your comments now. ♥ Nici♥ Vampire♥ Heart♥ 21:33, 15 November 2008 (UTC) reply