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Where is Microsoft azure in? 2A02:C7C:50C6:1400:98F2:41D4:B138:E161 ( talk) 13:32, 11 March 2023 (UTC)
Should facts about Microsoft negligent cybersecurity practices be hidden from this article? 84.78.242.206 ( talk) 19:21, 30 August 2023 (UTC)
Jmsrobinson, your sentence is inappropriate for multiple reasons. It violates WP:UNDUE by disproportionately highlighting criticism without a balanced inclusion of other opinions. The use of language like "has been criticized" veers into MOS:WEASEL territory. Also, the sentence is inconsistent with WP:LEAD, as it lacks necessary context and specificity. This is not to say that negligent security practices should not be mentioned on Wikipedia; rather, the issue is with the manner of their presentation here — a single, problematic sentence lacking in context and due weight. intforce ( talk) 09:33, 16 September 2023 (UTC)
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I am declining your request for a third opinion because there are too many people involved already in this discussion. Best of luck. Rublamb ( talk) 16:00, 21 September 2023 (UTC) |
The blue A is not the current logo for Microsoft Azure, as far as I understood. Please verify and adapt. see e.g. [1] https://www.microsoft.com/en-us/legal/intellectualproperty/trademarks 2003:C5:CF47:2800:A82F:A392:243:7A04 ( talk) 21:53, 27 September 2023 (UTC)
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Where is Microsoft azure in? 2A02:C7C:50C6:1400:98F2:41D4:B138:E161 ( talk) 13:32, 11 March 2023 (UTC)
Should facts about Microsoft negligent cybersecurity practices be hidden from this article? 84.78.242.206 ( talk) 19:21, 30 August 2023 (UTC)
Jmsrobinson, your sentence is inappropriate for multiple reasons. It violates WP:UNDUE by disproportionately highlighting criticism without a balanced inclusion of other opinions. The use of language like "has been criticized" veers into MOS:WEASEL territory. Also, the sentence is inconsistent with WP:LEAD, as it lacks necessary context and specificity. This is not to say that negligent security practices should not be mentioned on Wikipedia; rather, the issue is with the manner of their presentation here — a single, problematic sentence lacking in context and due weight. intforce ( talk) 09:33, 16 September 2023 (UTC)
Response to third opinion request: |
I am declining your request for a third opinion because there are too many people involved already in this discussion. Best of luck. Rublamb ( talk) 16:00, 21 September 2023 (UTC) |
The blue A is not the current logo for Microsoft Azure, as far as I understood. Please verify and adapt. see e.g. [1] https://www.microsoft.com/en-us/legal/intellectualproperty/trademarks 2003:C5:CF47:2800:A82F:A392:243:7A04 ( talk) 21:53, 27 September 2023 (UTC)