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Reviewer: Fehufanga ( talk · contribs) 05:54, 12 February 2023 (UTC)
Hello, I'll be reviewing the article. This is my first GA review.
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Micronation as a word has no basis in international law- "International law" is a duplicate link.
and George Cruickshank of the Empire of Atlantium- In both instances, "Empire of Atlantium" is a duplicate link.
an independent constitutional republic called New Atlantis- "New Atlantis" is a duplicate link.
In 1964, writer Leicester Hemingway- "Leicester Hemingway" is a duplicate link.
based his sovereignty on the Guano Islands Act of 1856- "Guano Islands Act of 1856" is a duplicate link
engage in intermicronational diplomacy- Diplomacy is a replink
The study of micronationalism is known as micropatriology or micropatrology.- This doesn't seem like it fits in the section "Legality".
Several intermicronational organisations also exist- No need to link "organisations".
delayed due to the COVID-19 pandemic- "COVID-19 pandemic" is a duplicate link
held at Dangar Island, Sydney- "Dangar Island" and "Sydney" are duplicate links.
"with many country pages [on MicroWiki] longer than those of real nations [on Wikipedia],"- Consider adding a ref for this quotation separately.
They claimed to be the princesses of the historical Sunda Empire- Change the Sunda Empire link (which is actually a link to the micronation), to Sunda Kingdom? I remember when this went viral here a few years ago.
and hosted by the Principality of Aigues-Mortes- "Principality of Aigues-Mortes" is a duplicate link.
The documentary explored various micronations around the world, and included- The comma before "and" should be removed.
off the coast of Scotland, and declared- The comma before "and" should be removed.
various micronations around the world, and included- The comma before "and" should be removed.
do not involve terra nullius, and are not subject- The comma before "and" should be removed.
was founded in 2014, and is run- The comma before "and" should be removed.
The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.
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Reviewer: Fehufanga ( talk · contribs) 05:54, 12 February 2023 (UTC)
Hello, I'll be reviewing the article. This is my first GA review.
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Micronation as a word has no basis in international law- "International law" is a duplicate link.
and George Cruickshank of the Empire of Atlantium- In both instances, "Empire of Atlantium" is a duplicate link.
an independent constitutional republic called New Atlantis- "New Atlantis" is a duplicate link.
In 1964, writer Leicester Hemingway- "Leicester Hemingway" is a duplicate link.
based his sovereignty on the Guano Islands Act of 1856- "Guano Islands Act of 1856" is a duplicate link
engage in intermicronational diplomacy- Diplomacy is a replink
The study of micronationalism is known as micropatriology or micropatrology.- This doesn't seem like it fits in the section "Legality".
Several intermicronational organisations also exist- No need to link "organisations".
delayed due to the COVID-19 pandemic- "COVID-19 pandemic" is a duplicate link
held at Dangar Island, Sydney- "Dangar Island" and "Sydney" are duplicate links.
"with many country pages [on MicroWiki] longer than those of real nations [on Wikipedia],"- Consider adding a ref for this quotation separately.
They claimed to be the princesses of the historical Sunda Empire- Change the Sunda Empire link (which is actually a link to the micronation), to Sunda Kingdom? I remember when this went viral here a few years ago.
and hosted by the Principality of Aigues-Mortes- "Principality of Aigues-Mortes" is a duplicate link.
The documentary explored various micronations around the world, and included- The comma before "and" should be removed.
off the coast of Scotland, and declared- The comma before "and" should be removed.
various micronations around the world, and included- The comma before "and" should be removed.
do not involve terra nullius, and are not subject- The comma before "and" should be removed.
was founded in 2014, and is run- The comma before "and" should be removed.