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Reviewer: Keresluna ( talk · contribs) 18:13, 15 August 2023 (UTC)
Ok, I'll review this article, although it might take me some time as I might be busy for the next few days. Keres🌕 Luna edits! 18:13, 15 August 2023 (UTC)
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1. Well-written: | ||
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1a. the prose is clear, concise, and understandable to an appropriately broad audience; spelling and grammar are correct. | |
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1b. it complies with the Manual of Style guidelines for lead sections, layout, words to watch, fiction, and list incorporation. | Check. |
2. Verifiable with no original research: | ||
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2a. it contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with the layout style guideline. | |
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2b. reliable sources are cited inline. All content that could reasonably be challenged, except for plot summaries and that which summarizes cited content elsewhere in the article, must be cited no later than the end of the paragraph (or line if the content is not in prose). | |
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2c. it contains no original research. | |
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2d. it contains no copyright violations or plagiarism. | Earwig didn't find anything. |
3. Broad in its coverage: | ||
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3a. it addresses the main aspects of the topic. | Looks fine. |
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3b. it stays focused on the topic without going into unnecessary detail (see summary style). | |
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4. Neutral: it represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each. | |
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5. Stable: it does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute. | Stable. |
6. Illustrated, if possible, by media such as images, video, or audio: | ||
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6a. media are tagged with their copyright statuses, and valid non-free use rationales are provided for non-free content. | |
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6b. media are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions. | |
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7. Overall assessment. | Pass. |
Just a quick glance for now. Keres🌕 Luna edits! 18:27, 15 August 2023 (UTC)
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@ HoHo3143: Sorry for taking so long to review the article. I will try to finish in a few days. Meanwhile, here are some grammar comments; feel free to reject them as you see fit. Keres🌕 Luna edits! 20:32, 21 August 2023 (UTC)
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Reviewer: Keresluna ( talk · contribs) 18:13, 15 August 2023 (UTC)
Ok, I'll review this article, although it might take me some time as I might be busy for the next few days. Keres🌕 Luna edits! 18:13, 15 August 2023 (UTC)
Rate | Attribute | Review Comment |
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1. Well-written: | ||
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1a. the prose is clear, concise, and understandable to an appropriately broad audience; spelling and grammar are correct. | |
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1b. it complies with the Manual of Style guidelines for lead sections, layout, words to watch, fiction, and list incorporation. | Check. |
2. Verifiable with no original research: | ||
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2a. it contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with the layout style guideline. | |
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2b. reliable sources are cited inline. All content that could reasonably be challenged, except for plot summaries and that which summarizes cited content elsewhere in the article, must be cited no later than the end of the paragraph (or line if the content is not in prose). | |
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2c. it contains no original research. | |
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2d. it contains no copyright violations or plagiarism. | Earwig didn't find anything. |
3. Broad in its coverage: | ||
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3a. it addresses the main aspects of the topic. | Looks fine. |
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3b. it stays focused on the topic without going into unnecessary detail (see summary style). | |
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4. Neutral: it represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each. | |
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5. Stable: it does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute. | Stable. |
6. Illustrated, if possible, by media such as images, video, or audio: | ||
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6a. media are tagged with their copyright statuses, and valid non-free use rationales are provided for non-free content. | |
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6b. media are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions. | |
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7. Overall assessment. | Pass. |
Just a quick glance for now. Keres🌕 Luna edits! 18:27, 15 August 2023 (UTC)
Dead link: 1, 21
@ HoHo3143: Sorry for taking so long to review the article. I will try to finish in a few days. Meanwhile, here are some grammar comments; feel free to reject them as you see fit. Keres🌕 Luna edits! 20:32, 21 August 2023 (UTC)