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Reviewer: Kingsif ( talk · contribs) 22:40, 12 August 2020 (UTC)
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demo recordings recorded byto avoid the repetition
secure a contract and she ultimatelythis would read better if "and" was replaced by a comma or semi-colon; it's not another "hope", it's an outcome, if that makes sense
Marina solely wrote and produced all of the six songs that appear on the EP...→ 'Marina wrote and produced all of the six songs that appear on the EP by herself...'
Around this same time- 'around this time' or 'at the same time'
wrapped candies- shouldn't the article be in BritEng (unless it is, then this should be linked to hard candy for disambiguation)
she suggested that fans- could be 'later suggested', to note that it wasn't during the release that she told people to buy it elsewhere
recorded for an updated version- 'rerecorded'
During her time spent on Myspace...in its section; it would be better as background
as yet "another MySpace success story"- if the "yet" is in the quotation, the marks should be moved to include it; if not, it can be removed
Kingsif – Hello. I am just checking in to see when I can expect some comments for the review. Thanks, Carbrera ( talk) 12:54, 21 August 2020 (UTC).
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Mermaid vs Sailor has been listed as one of the
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Reviewer: Kingsif ( talk · contribs) 22:40, 12 August 2020 (UTC)
Hi, I'm Kingsif, and I'll be doing this review. This is an automated message that helps keep the bot updating the nominated article's talkpage working and allows me to say hi. Feel free to reach out and, if you think the review has gone well, I have some open GA nominations that you could (but are under no obligation to) look at. Kingsif ( talk) 22:40, 12 August 2020 (UTC)
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demo recordings recorded byto avoid the repetition
secure a contract and she ultimatelythis would read better if "and" was replaced by a comma or semi-colon; it's not another "hope", it's an outcome, if that makes sense
Marina solely wrote and produced all of the six songs that appear on the EP...→ 'Marina wrote and produced all of the six songs that appear on the EP by herself...'
Around this same time- 'around this time' or 'at the same time'
wrapped candies- shouldn't the article be in BritEng (unless it is, then this should be linked to hard candy for disambiguation)
she suggested that fans- could be 'later suggested', to note that it wasn't during the release that she told people to buy it elsewhere
recorded for an updated version- 'rerecorded'
During her time spent on Myspace...in its section; it would be better as background
as yet "another MySpace success story"- if the "yet" is in the quotation, the marks should be moved to include it; if not, it can be removed
Kingsif – Hello. I am just checking in to see when I can expect some comments for the review. Thanks, Carbrera ( talk) 12:54, 21 August 2020 (UTC).
On hold Kingsif ( talk) 21:30, 22 August 2020 (UTC)