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Reviewer: Tim riley ( talk · contribs) 06:51, 17 July 2015 (UTC)
Starting first read-through. More soonest.
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This is plainly of GA standard. May I make a few preliminary suggestions on minor aspects of the prose?
I have corrected a few typos and comma splices: please check you're happy with my changes. Tim riley talk 07:06, 17 July 2015 (UTC)
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No complications here. A fine article! If you have plans to take it to FAC I advise you to go to peer review first: there are a few very minor prose tweaks I haven't thought it necessary to raise for GAN but which will need doing before FAC. Please ping me if you take the article to PR. Tim riley talk 10:39, 17 July 2015 (UTC)
I have cut the following from the first section since an editor has marked it as unsourced. If someone finds a source please add it back in. I also removed a summarizing line on this point from the lede.
"After the ephemeral Shepseskare, Menkauhor is the second most obscure ruler of the dynasty. citation needed" Sizeofint ( talk) 10:40, 29 April 2016 (UTC)
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Reviewer: Tim riley ( talk · contribs) 06:51, 17 July 2015 (UTC)
Starting first read-through. More soonest.
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This is plainly of GA standard. May I make a few preliminary suggestions on minor aspects of the prose?
I have corrected a few typos and comma splices: please check you're happy with my changes. Tim riley talk 07:06, 17 July 2015 (UTC)
GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria
No complications here. A fine article! If you have plans to take it to FAC I advise you to go to peer review first: there are a few very minor prose tweaks I haven't thought it necessary to raise for GAN but which will need doing before FAC. Please ping me if you take the article to PR. Tim riley talk 10:39, 17 July 2015 (UTC)
I have cut the following from the first section since an editor has marked it as unsourced. If someone finds a source please add it back in. I also removed a summarizing line on this point from the lede.
"After the ephemeral Shepseskare, Menkauhor is the second most obscure ruler of the dynasty. citation needed" Sizeofint ( talk) 10:40, 29 April 2016 (UTC)
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