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Reviewer: Changedforbetter ( talk · contribs) 14:58, 27 September 2017 (UTC)
Taking a crack at this! Should be a quick one, this article is definitely one of the best fictional character articles I've seen in quite some time.-- Changedforbetter ( talk) 14:58, 27 September 2017 (UTC)
Otherwise, this section is solid.-- Changedforbetter ( talk) 16:38, 27 September 2017 (UTC)
I think that's all for here :-)-- Changedforbetter ( talk) 18:53, 27 September 2017 (UTC)
Everything else is good, almost there.-- Changedforbetter ( talk) 19:20, 27 September 2017 (UTC)
That's about it for here.-- Changedforbetter ( talk) 01:44, 28 September 2017 (UTC)
This section is pretty much perfect. My only minor gripe would be citing ever actress that Mowry has lost awards to. While there's nothing particularly wrong with doing so, it isn't really necessary either (I usually only do that in the event that the media or award ceremonies make a big deal out of the loss, for example Michelle Pfeiffer losing to Jessica Tandy). But I'll leave that up to you.
Alight, that's it for me! I'll pass as soon as these comments are addressed. Once again, outstanding article.-- Changedforbetter ( talk) 01:52, 28 September 2017 (UTC)
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Reviewer: Changedforbetter ( talk · contribs) 14:58, 27 September 2017 (UTC)
Taking a crack at this! Should be a quick one, this article is definitely one of the best fictional character articles I've seen in quite some time.-- Changedforbetter ( talk) 14:58, 27 September 2017 (UTC)
Otherwise, this section is solid.-- Changedforbetter ( talk) 16:38, 27 September 2017 (UTC)
I think that's all for here :-)-- Changedforbetter ( talk) 18:53, 27 September 2017 (UTC)
Everything else is good, almost there.-- Changedforbetter ( talk) 19:20, 27 September 2017 (UTC)
That's about it for here.-- Changedforbetter ( talk) 01:44, 28 September 2017 (UTC)
This section is pretty much perfect. My only minor gripe would be citing ever actress that Mowry has lost awards to. While there's nothing particularly wrong with doing so, it isn't really necessary either (I usually only do that in the event that the media or award ceremonies make a big deal out of the loss, for example Michelle Pfeiffer losing to Jessica Tandy). But I'll leave that up to you.
Alight, that's it for me! I'll pass as soon as these comments are addressed. Once again, outstanding article.-- Changedforbetter ( talk) 01:52, 28 September 2017 (UTC)