a side-scrolling platform video game developed and published by Capcom in 2006 for the PlayStation Portable (PSP) handheld game console. - This sentence is too long. Break it down into: "a side-scrolling platform video game developed and published by Capcom", and "It was released for the PlayStation Portable (PSP) handheld game console in March 2006".
the latter two which were added for the remake). - "which" is not needed. I don't think a plot section needs this actually. It can be put in the development section or the gameplay section instead.
Plot section doesn't seem to be completed. I was expecting more details, or at least a proper ending. It is a "setting" section instead of a "plot" section as it stands now.
Mega Man empties his life meter - I don't think this is an active action. Rephrased it to "Lives will be consumed if Mega Man touches certain spikes, or falls into a pit." or something similar
The IGN source only supports If Mega Man defeats the Robot Master using his primary weapon, the Robot Master will be captured and reprogrammed. This allows players to play through stages as one of the Robot Master but not other information presented in the second paragraph
It was featured at Capcom's annual Gamer's Day convention in Las Vegas in 2006 - Games tend to be shown off in most gaming convention. It should not be a special case unless something major happened there.
It was bundled with Mega Man: Maverick Hunter X on UMD.[13] It was slated to be re-released on the PSP's PlayStation Network service along with other Capcom PSP titles including Maverick Hunter X - It was bundled with and released along Maverick Hunter X. Two sentences are talking about the same thing.
"The concept for these designs was 'toys'. We wanted cute designs geared towards little kids ... the kinds of characters that you'd see hanging off of keychains and such," and "Not only that, I made sure to tell the designers not to skimp on any of the original Mega Man details. We wanted their proportions and movements to be accurately reflected in these designs as well."
Detroit Free Press called it "a must-buy for fans of the long-running series, despite its super cute-ified new look." - Detroit Free Press should be in italic
a side-scrolling platform video game developed and published by Capcom in 2006 for the PlayStation Portable (PSP) handheld game console. - This sentence is too long. Break it down into: "a side-scrolling platform video game developed and published by Capcom", and "It was released for the PlayStation Portable (PSP) handheld game console in March 2006".
the latter two which were added for the remake). - "which" is not needed. I don't think a plot section needs this actually. It can be put in the development section or the gameplay section instead.
Plot section doesn't seem to be completed. I was expecting more details, or at least a proper ending. It is a "setting" section instead of a "plot" section as it stands now.
Mega Man empties his life meter - I don't think this is an active action. Rephrased it to "Lives will be consumed if Mega Man touches certain spikes, or falls into a pit." or something similar
The IGN source only supports If Mega Man defeats the Robot Master using his primary weapon, the Robot Master will be captured and reprogrammed. This allows players to play through stages as one of the Robot Master but not other information presented in the second paragraph
It was featured at Capcom's annual Gamer's Day convention in Las Vegas in 2006 - Games tend to be shown off in most gaming convention. It should not be a special case unless something major happened there.
It was bundled with Mega Man: Maverick Hunter X on UMD.[13] It was slated to be re-released on the PSP's PlayStation Network service along with other Capcom PSP titles including Maverick Hunter X - It was bundled with and released along Maverick Hunter X. Two sentences are talking about the same thing.
"The concept for these designs was 'toys'. We wanted cute designs geared towards little kids ... the kinds of characters that you'd see hanging off of keychains and such," and "Not only that, I made sure to tell the designers not to skimp on any of the original Mega Man details. We wanted their proportions and movements to be accurately reflected in these designs as well."
Detroit Free Press called it "a must-buy for fans of the long-running series, despite its super cute-ified new look." - Detroit Free Press should be in italic