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The result was: promoted by
AirshipJungleman29 (
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09:49, 8 August 2023 (UTC)
Created by Pamzeis ( talk). Self-nominated at 04:58, 14 July 2023 (UTC). Post-promotion hook changes for this nom will be logged at Template talk:Did you know nominations/List of Mckenna Grace performances; consider watching this nomination, if it is successful, until the hook appears on the Main Page.
Hello Pamzeis. After completing my preliminary copyedit I always ask questions about the article to ensure that my edit reflects the intended meaning and is clear in doing so. Please reply to each point by indenting below each one like you would a conversation; items will be struck out once they have been answered. Please ping me with {{ U}}, {{ ping}}, or {{ re}} as I have a lot of items on my watchlist. My copyediting process can be found here. ~~~~ |
Hey, Pamzeis, good work on the article. There isn't much I had to tweak. A few questions:
Formatting and wikilink in original. Any particular reason why the film isn't being referred to by its actual name? — Tenryuu 🐲 ( 💬 • 📝 ) 19:28, 7 August 2023 (UTC)In 2022, Grace wrote, executive produced, and starred in a sequel to The Bad Seed [...]
Going to assume that she doesn't do this anymore? — Tenryuu 🐲 ( 💬 • 📝 ) 19:28, 7 August 2023 (UTC)She trained in cheer, gymnastics, tap, and ballet—as well as participating in beauty pageants, where she was crowned "Tiny Miss Texas".
Looking forward to your responses. — Tenryuu 🐲 ( 💬 • 📝 ) 19:28, 7 August 2023 (UTC)
because it seemed irrelevant to who Grace is. Best of luck with the nomination! — Tenryuu 🐲 ( 💬 • 📝 ) 00:12, 9 August 2023 (UTC)The film tells the story of Mary Adler (Grace), an intellectually gifted seven-year-old who becomes the subject of a custody battle between her maternal uncle and maternal grandmother.
The article includes She took a college course on media aesthetics in 2021, in which she wrote about The Handmaid's Tale approximately four times
in the "Early life section" Outside of this not being in her "early life" (there's a few other sentences there which also don't appear to be appropriate for this section title), this also does not adequately introduce what "The Handmaid's Tale (TV show)" is. This is only done much later in the article, when it states: In 2021, Grace began recurring on the Hulu dystopian series The Handmaid's Tale, an adaptation of the 1985 novel of the same name
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F4U (
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14:31, 15 August 2023 (UTC)
Just saying... that the current infobox image is horrible and does her no good. Might do well to change it. 103.177.232.33 ( talk) 19:21, 3 October 2023 (UTC)
I complained above about the previous image, and just wanted to note that ip103 is a different person, I don't know what their specific complaints might be. The current image is a marginal improvement over the previous image (from the same photoshoot) where McKenna was smiling so hard she it was almost wikt:gurning. As this is supposed to be an encyclopedia I still would prefer a more serious and formal image but from the available images on Wikimedia Commons this one is adequate. I still think the non-smiling image would be better. -- 109.77.197.70 ( talk) 20:32, 13 October 2023 (UTC)
If I remember it was featured on the home page back in 2023, so is this technically allowed for an article to be featured twice within a one-year timespan? 2605:8D80:403:92E6:A80B:C481:A643:AB40 ( talk) 12:10, 25 June 2024 (UTC)
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Mckenna Grace is a featured article; it (or a previous version of it) has been identified as one of the best articles produced by the Wikipedia community. Even so, if you can update or improve it, please do so. | |||||||||||||
This article appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page as Today's featured article on June 25, 2024. | |||||||||||||
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A
fact from this article appeared on Wikipedia's
Main Page in the "
Did you know?" column on
August 15, 2023. The text of the entry was: Did you know ... that
Mckenna Grace (pictured)
has portrayed younger versions of
Sabrina the Teenage Witch,
Tonya Harding, and
Captain Marvel? | |||||||||||||
Current status: Featured article |
This article must adhere to the biographies of living persons (BLP) policy, even if it is not a biography, because it contains material about living persons. Contentious material about living persons that is unsourced or poorly sourced must be removed immediately from the article and its talk page, especially if potentially libellous. If such material is repeatedly inserted, or if you have other concerns, please report the issue to this noticeboard.If you are a subject of this article, or acting on behalf of one, and you need help, please see this help page. |
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Material from Mckenna Grace was split to List of Mckenna Grace performances on 13 July 2023 from this version. The former page's history now serves to provide attribution for that content in the latter page, and it must not be deleted so long as the latter page exists. Please leave this template in place to link the article histories and preserve this attribution. |
The result was: promoted by
AirshipJungleman29 (
talk)
09:49, 8 August 2023 (UTC)
Created by Pamzeis ( talk). Self-nominated at 04:58, 14 July 2023 (UTC). Post-promotion hook changes for this nom will be logged at Template talk:Did you know nominations/List of Mckenna Grace performances; consider watching this nomination, if it is successful, until the hook appears on the Main Page.
Hello Pamzeis. After completing my preliminary copyedit I always ask questions about the article to ensure that my edit reflects the intended meaning and is clear in doing so. Please reply to each point by indenting below each one like you would a conversation; items will be struck out once they have been answered. Please ping me with {{ U}}, {{ ping}}, or {{ re}} as I have a lot of items on my watchlist. My copyediting process can be found here. ~~~~ |
Hey, Pamzeis, good work on the article. There isn't much I had to tweak. A few questions:
Formatting and wikilink in original. Any particular reason why the film isn't being referred to by its actual name? — Tenryuu 🐲 ( 💬 • 📝 ) 19:28, 7 August 2023 (UTC)In 2022, Grace wrote, executive produced, and starred in a sequel to The Bad Seed [...]
Going to assume that she doesn't do this anymore? — Tenryuu 🐲 ( 💬 • 📝 ) 19:28, 7 August 2023 (UTC)She trained in cheer, gymnastics, tap, and ballet—as well as participating in beauty pageants, where she was crowned "Tiny Miss Texas".
Looking forward to your responses. — Tenryuu 🐲 ( 💬 • 📝 ) 19:28, 7 August 2023 (UTC)
because it seemed irrelevant to who Grace is. Best of luck with the nomination! — Tenryuu 🐲 ( 💬 • 📝 ) 00:12, 9 August 2023 (UTC)The film tells the story of Mary Adler (Grace), an intellectually gifted seven-year-old who becomes the subject of a custody battle between her maternal uncle and maternal grandmother.
The article includes She took a college course on media aesthetics in 2021, in which she wrote about The Handmaid's Tale approximately four times
in the "Early life section" Outside of this not being in her "early life" (there's a few other sentences there which also don't appear to be appropriate for this section title), this also does not adequately introduce what "The Handmaid's Tale (TV show)" is. This is only done much later in the article, when it states: In 2021, Grace began recurring on the Hulu dystopian series The Handmaid's Tale, an adaptation of the 1985 novel of the same name
:3
F4U (
they
/it)
14:31, 15 August 2023 (UTC)
Just saying... that the current infobox image is horrible and does her no good. Might do well to change it. 103.177.232.33 ( talk) 19:21, 3 October 2023 (UTC)
I complained above about the previous image, and just wanted to note that ip103 is a different person, I don't know what their specific complaints might be. The current image is a marginal improvement over the previous image (from the same photoshoot) where McKenna was smiling so hard she it was almost wikt:gurning. As this is supposed to be an encyclopedia I still would prefer a more serious and formal image but from the available images on Wikimedia Commons this one is adequate. I still think the non-smiling image would be better. -- 109.77.197.70 ( talk) 20:32, 13 October 2023 (UTC)
If I remember it was featured on the home page back in 2023, so is this technically allowed for an article to be featured twice within a one-year timespan? 2605:8D80:403:92E6:A80B:C481:A643:AB40 ( talk) 12:10, 25 June 2024 (UTC)