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Good work overall. Some mostly minor comments:
I recently listened to the commentary for the episode, and I think this production section does not do it justice. There are a lot of things that could be discussed, such as Hammill being a long-time fan of the show and how he also got to being the voice of the bodyguard, they discuss the rat milking scene, and there is a mistake. Leavalle wasn't inspired by Jack Ruby, his design was inspired by this photo of a bodyguard when Oswald was shot by Jack Ruby. You need to start including more details and try to have some flow to the sections. For example, start out with writing, then transition into guest stars. Then have a new paragraph for animation notes. And the episode was named the best of the season by IGN. [1] This should be mentioned-- Scorpion 0422 02:42, 11 September 2008 (UTC)
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Is it just me or does Homer's "sleeper hold" is really the vulcan nerve pinch from Star Trek? Bart-16 ( talk) 08:20, 2 October 2009 (UTC)
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Good work overall. Some mostly minor comments:
I recently listened to the commentary for the episode, and I think this production section does not do it justice. There are a lot of things that could be discussed, such as Hammill being a long-time fan of the show and how he also got to being the voice of the bodyguard, they discuss the rat milking scene, and there is a mistake. Leavalle wasn't inspired by Jack Ruby, his design was inspired by this photo of a bodyguard when Oswald was shot by Jack Ruby. You need to start including more details and try to have some flow to the sections. For example, start out with writing, then transition into guest stars. Then have a new paragraph for animation notes. And the episode was named the best of the season by IGN. [1] This should be mentioned-- Scorpion 0422 02:42, 11 September 2008 (UTC)
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