This is fine as most of the violated contents are basic words ("Marvel vs. Capcom 2: New Age of Heroes", "Super Street Fighter II Turbo HD Remix", etc).
Marvel vs. Capcom 2 is the first game in the franchise to utilize 2.5D graphics; although the character artwork uses traditional 2D-animated sprites, the backgrounds and visual effects are rendered in 3D.
Could this be worded a little differently? Such as; "The character artwork uses traditional 2D-animated sprites, the backgrounds and visual effects are rendered in 3D. This made Marvel vs. Capcom 2 the first game in the franchise to feature
2.5D graphics".
You might wanna hyperlink "2.5D" as some people may not know what it is.
Gameplay
Assists come with a drawback; assist characters receive extra damage if stuck by the opponent.
Remove the "Assists come with a drawback;" section, it seems out of place and unnecessary.
Marvel vs. Capcom 2: New Age of Heroes contains a roster of 56 playable characters.
The reference says it's 55 and an "alternate costume". You may want to change that, just personal preference.
Development
"The game was the first in the Marvel vs. Capcom series to combine hand-drawn two-dimensional sprites with three-dimensional backgrounds".
"The game was the first in the Marvel vs. Capcom series to combine hand-drawn two-dimensional sprites upon three-dimensional backgrounds" may be better.
It's on the second page. MvC2 effectively combines hand-drawn two-dimensional sprites with cartoon-like three-dimensional backgrounds.Wani (
talk)
04:28, 6 July 2015 (UTC)reply
The 4th paragraph seems very reliant on one
reference.
With
MOS:TITLE, Online magazines, newspapers, and news sites with original content should generally be italicized , so, if Engadget is a website of similar style, it should be italicized.
AdrianGamer (
talk)
02:56, 6 July 2015 (UTC)reply
@
AdrianGamer: Is it safe to pass the review now?
Wani has fixed all the issues I stated in the review. As for MobyGames, it's only being used for release dates, wouldn't it be fine to use? Anarchyte03:33, 6 July 2015 (UTC)reply
MobyGames features user-submitted content. There may be some inaccuracies. So, no, it should not be used, even just for release dates.
AdrianGamer (
talk)
04:01, 6 July 2015 (UTC)reply
Drat...it's gonna be a nightmare trying to find articles verifying the earlier dates. Oh well. I'll start looking.
Wani (
talk)
04:32, 6 July 2015 (UTC)reply
I've successfully replaced MobyGames with other sources (easier than I thought it'd be). Still need to replace the publishers with work fields.
Wani (
talk)
19:02, 6 July 2015 (UTC)reply
This is fine as most of the violated contents are basic words ("Marvel vs. Capcom 2: New Age of Heroes", "Super Street Fighter II Turbo HD Remix", etc).
Marvel vs. Capcom 2 is the first game in the franchise to utilize 2.5D graphics; although the character artwork uses traditional 2D-animated sprites, the backgrounds and visual effects are rendered in 3D.
Could this be worded a little differently? Such as; "The character artwork uses traditional 2D-animated sprites, the backgrounds and visual effects are rendered in 3D. This made Marvel vs. Capcom 2 the first game in the franchise to feature
2.5D graphics".
You might wanna hyperlink "2.5D" as some people may not know what it is.
Gameplay
Assists come with a drawback; assist characters receive extra damage if stuck by the opponent.
Remove the "Assists come with a drawback;" section, it seems out of place and unnecessary.
Marvel vs. Capcom 2: New Age of Heroes contains a roster of 56 playable characters.
The reference says it's 55 and an "alternate costume". You may want to change that, just personal preference.
Development
"The game was the first in the Marvel vs. Capcom series to combine hand-drawn two-dimensional sprites with three-dimensional backgrounds".
"The game was the first in the Marvel vs. Capcom series to combine hand-drawn two-dimensional sprites upon three-dimensional backgrounds" may be better.
It's on the second page. MvC2 effectively combines hand-drawn two-dimensional sprites with cartoon-like three-dimensional backgrounds.Wani (
talk)
04:28, 6 July 2015 (UTC)reply
The 4th paragraph seems very reliant on one
reference.
With
MOS:TITLE, Online magazines, newspapers, and news sites with original content should generally be italicized , so, if Engadget is a website of similar style, it should be italicized.
AdrianGamer (
talk)
02:56, 6 July 2015 (UTC)reply
@
AdrianGamer: Is it safe to pass the review now?
Wani has fixed all the issues I stated in the review. As for MobyGames, it's only being used for release dates, wouldn't it be fine to use? Anarchyte03:33, 6 July 2015 (UTC)reply
MobyGames features user-submitted content. There may be some inaccuracies. So, no, it should not be used, even just for release dates.
AdrianGamer (
talk)
04:01, 6 July 2015 (UTC)reply
Drat...it's gonna be a nightmare trying to find articles verifying the earlier dates. Oh well. I'll start looking.
Wani (
talk)
04:32, 6 July 2015 (UTC)reply
I've successfully replaced MobyGames with other sources (easier than I thought it'd be). Still need to replace the publishers with work fields.
Wani (
talk)
19:02, 6 July 2015 (UTC)reply