Prior attended the University of San Diego High School is a really short sentence. Even adding "Growing up" would help
Professional career
teammate should be capitalized.
You use the "days later" in two sentences, maybe change the wording and expand on his hamstring (ie. include that he was 16-for-35 (.457) in his last nine games)
Prior attended the University of San Diego High School is a really short sentence. Even adding "Growing up" would help
Professional career
teammate should be capitalized.
You use the "days later" in two sentences, maybe change the wording and expand on his hamstring (ie. include that he was 16-for-35 (.457) in his last nine games)