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I left the following feedback for the creator/future reviewers while reviewing this article: Nice article. Some statements are uncited: could that be fixed?
Schminnte (
talk •
contribs) 01:38, 20 July 2023 (UTC)reply
Schminnte, all statements are sourced and cited in the way WP accepts inline citations (for several sentences in a paragraph eg). If you feel anything is unsourced you should tag that.--
Wuerzele (
talk) 14:02, 20 July 2023 (UTC)reply
Schminnte , so You mean a single sentence: "In 2021, AlpServices was hacked and an investigation of the leaked data published in 2023 by the European Investigative Collaborations named
Abu Dhabi Secrets."?
This sentence is one statement (not some statements) and most importantly it refers to a WP page,
Abu Dhabi Secrets where this info is self explanatory. A WP page does not necessarily need a source.--
Wuerzele (
talk) 14:13, 20 July 2023 (UTC)reply
Apologies for the mistake in semantics. As for the sentence, I would suggest including a citation per point four of
WP:V#Responsibility for providing citations. It would be helpful to have that cited there as well for the sake of verifiability. That was all. Thanks, Schminnte (
talk •
contribs) 14:21, 20 July 2023 (UTC)reply
Maybe
Robert McClenon, but the draft is poorly written with lots of repetition, and merely having
Camuvin pasting it in here, disregarding structure etc is no fusion. --
Wuerzele (
talk) 17:39, 1 August 2023 (UTC)reply
User:Wuerzele - It is true that the draft is poorly written, and its content should not simply be copied into the article, which would make the article poorly written with repetition. The information in the draft with sources should be added intelligently to the article. That is often difficult and will take time.
Robert McClenon (
talk) 18:36, 1 August 2023 (UTC)reply
I cleaned up the dump after writing
Camuvin and not hearing back. It is still way too long and a number of claims are unsourced!--
Wuerzele (
talk) 00:35, 2 August 2023 (UTC)reply
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I left the following feedback for the creator/future reviewers while reviewing this article: Nice article. Some statements are uncited: could that be fixed?
Schminnte (
talk •
contribs) 01:38, 20 July 2023 (UTC)reply
Schminnte, all statements are sourced and cited in the way WP accepts inline citations (for several sentences in a paragraph eg). If you feel anything is unsourced you should tag that.--
Wuerzele (
talk) 14:02, 20 July 2023 (UTC)reply
Schminnte , so You mean a single sentence: "In 2021, AlpServices was hacked and an investigation of the leaked data published in 2023 by the European Investigative Collaborations named
Abu Dhabi Secrets."?
This sentence is one statement (not some statements) and most importantly it refers to a WP page,
Abu Dhabi Secrets where this info is self explanatory. A WP page does not necessarily need a source.--
Wuerzele (
talk) 14:13, 20 July 2023 (UTC)reply
Apologies for the mistake in semantics. As for the sentence, I would suggest including a citation per point four of
WP:V#Responsibility for providing citations. It would be helpful to have that cited there as well for the sake of verifiability. That was all. Thanks, Schminnte (
talk •
contribs) 14:21, 20 July 2023 (UTC)reply
Maybe
Robert McClenon, but the draft is poorly written with lots of repetition, and merely having
Camuvin pasting it in here, disregarding structure etc is no fusion. --
Wuerzele (
talk) 17:39, 1 August 2023 (UTC)reply
User:Wuerzele - It is true that the draft is poorly written, and its content should not simply be copied into the article, which would make the article poorly written with repetition. The information in the draft with sources should be added intelligently to the article. That is often difficult and will take time.
Robert McClenon (
talk) 18:36, 1 August 2023 (UTC)reply
I cleaned up the dump after writing
Camuvin and not hearing back. It is still way too long and a number of claims are unsourced!--
Wuerzele (
talk) 00:35, 2 August 2023 (UTC)reply