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Modussiccandi: thanks! I'm going to take about a day and half (hopefully less) to give the article another full read through, confirm the addressing of the comments below, and spot-check a few more sources. If anything else turns up, I'll ping you.
Firefangledfeathers (
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13:18, 26 October 2022 (UTC)reply
There's a Harvref error related to Brendt 2018 that I'm fairly sure is caused by "ref=none" in the bibliography. I don't think it's needed here.
Firefangledfeathers (
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"a member of the Austrian resistance to National Socialism and helped prepare the Allied landing in Normandy from the United States" is unclear. As I understand it, Joseph was at this point part of the United States Army, but this makes it seem like his preparations for D-Day were as part of the Austrian resistance. Could we use "resistance to Nazism" instead?
Firefangledfeathers (
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03:43, 24 October 2022 (UTC)reply
"and helped prepare the Allied landing in Normandy from the United States" still needs some work. If the Normandy detail is unclear in the sources, could we simplify to "later joined the United States Army"?
Firefangledfeathers (
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04:11, 25 October 2022 (UTC)reply
The source text is the following (I've highlighted the bit I translated; the text makes it clear that these are generations of female students): "in einer Zeit, in der in weiten Bereichen noch konservativer und autoritärer Unterricht vorherrschte, bot sie Studierenden neue Perspektiven, was sowohl die Lehrinhalte als auch die Vermittlung betraf. Schließlich war es ihre Funktion als Rollenvorbild für Studentinnen, welche sich für die nachfolgenden Generationen als wegweisend erweisen sollte."
Modussiccandi (
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14:07, 23 October 2022 (UTC)reply
"both Simon and Arlt viewed social work and its study as continuation of the Enlightenment project". Judging by machine translation, this may be an uncomfortably close paraphrase of the source. Could this be rewritten or directly quoted?
Firefangledfeathers (
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20:32, 23 October 2022 (UTC)reply
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Modussiccandi: thanks! I'm going to take about a day and half (hopefully less) to give the article another full read through, confirm the addressing of the comments below, and spot-check a few more sources. If anything else turns up, I'll ping you.
Firefangledfeathers (
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contribs)
13:18, 26 October 2022 (UTC)reply
There's a Harvref error related to Brendt 2018 that I'm fairly sure is caused by "ref=none" in the bibliography. I don't think it's needed here.
Firefangledfeathers (
talk /
contribs) 03:55, 23 October 2022 (UTC
"a member of the Austrian resistance to National Socialism and helped prepare the Allied landing in Normandy from the United States" is unclear. As I understand it, Joseph was at this point part of the United States Army, but this makes it seem like his preparations for D-Day were as part of the Austrian resistance. Could we use "resistance to Nazism" instead?
Firefangledfeathers (
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contribs)
03:43, 24 October 2022 (UTC)reply
"and helped prepare the Allied landing in Normandy from the United States" still needs some work. If the Normandy detail is unclear in the sources, could we simplify to "later joined the United States Army"?
Firefangledfeathers (
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contribs)
04:11, 25 October 2022 (UTC)reply
The source text is the following (I've highlighted the bit I translated; the text makes it clear that these are generations of female students): "in einer Zeit, in der in weiten Bereichen noch konservativer und autoritärer Unterricht vorherrschte, bot sie Studierenden neue Perspektiven, was sowohl die Lehrinhalte als auch die Vermittlung betraf. Schließlich war es ihre Funktion als Rollenvorbild für Studentinnen, welche sich für die nachfolgenden Generationen als wegweisend erweisen sollte."
Modussiccandi (
talk)
14:07, 23 October 2022 (UTC)reply
"both Simon and Arlt viewed social work and its study as continuation of the Enlightenment project". Judging by machine translation, this may be an uncomfortably close paraphrase of the source. Could this be rewritten or directly quoted?
Firefangledfeathers (
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contribs)
20:32, 23 October 2022 (UTC)reply