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I am nominating this article for review, primarily because of its "Plot" section failing 1.a in the criteria. It needs to have a fresh pair of eyes looking at it and be re-written.
GamerPro64
20:17, 2 August 2014 (UTC)
I've re-written it a bit, for accuracy (both in terms of grammar and what actually happened in the episode) and flow. This is how it looked when the article first passed, so it's far longer now. Gran 2 22:22, 2 August 2014 (UTC)
This AV Club review (written in 2014) can be integrated: http://www.avclub.com/tvclub/simpsons-marge-be-not-proud-203093 -- Coin945 ( talk) 09:30, 3 August 2014 (UTC)
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I am nominating this article for review, primarily because of its "Plot" section failing 1.a in the criteria. It needs to have a fresh pair of eyes looking at it and be re-written.
GamerPro64
20:17, 2 August 2014 (UTC)
I've re-written it a bit, for accuracy (both in terms of grammar and what actually happened in the episode) and flow. This is how it looked when the article first passed, so it's far longer now. Gran 2 22:22, 2 August 2014 (UTC)
This AV Club review (written in 2014) can be integrated: http://www.avclub.com/tvclub/simpsons-marge-be-not-proud-203093 -- Coin945 ( talk) 09:30, 3 August 2014 (UTC)