Again, please try to avoid dropping references in the middle of sentences unless there's a punctuation mark. So like this,[1] it's okay; like this[1] it's not.
I removed the Biography.com reference as it didn't seem fact-checked and presented very little info not already in other sources. Otherwise, all of the other references seem to be reputable.
I would recommend adding some information on producers of her albums. Especially since one of them was busbee, who die unexpectedly in 2019. Is there any info on how she selected him, or selected Greg Kurstin for Humble Quest?
Good point. I added more about Busbee. How they met to now she felt when he passed.
Sorry, had a hard time finding detail about why she chose Greg here.
Could you find any critical quotes describing her vocal style? I think these would be a great addition to the "Musical styles and influences" section.
Found two quality ones. I changed the heading of that section to "Artistry" since now that section covers a lot of subjects,
she took her first plane trip alone to attend a Grammy camp -- suggest elaboration on "Grammy camp" if possible
Again, please try to avoid dropping references in the middle of sentences unless there's a punctuation mark. So like this,[1] it's okay; like this[1] it's not.
I removed the Biography.com reference as it didn't seem fact-checked and presented very little info not already in other sources. Otherwise, all of the other references seem to be reputable.
I would recommend adding some information on producers of her albums. Especially since one of them was busbee, who die unexpectedly in 2019. Is there any info on how she selected him, or selected Greg Kurstin for Humble Quest?
Good point. I added more about Busbee. How they met to now she felt when he passed.
Sorry, had a hard time finding detail about why she chose Greg here.
Could you find any critical quotes describing her vocal style? I think these would be a great addition to the "Musical styles and influences" section.
Found two quality ones. I changed the heading of that section to "Artistry" since now that section covers a lot of subjects,
she took her first plane trip alone to attend a Grammy camp -- suggest elaboration on "Grammy camp" if possible