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Reviewer: Kpddg ( talk · contribs) 10:27, 6 January 2022 (UTC) reply

Hello ArsenalGhanaPartey. I will be reviewing this article over the coming days. Please let me know for any problems. Thank You. Kpddg ^(talk) 10:27, 6 January 2022 (UTC) reply

Section-wise Assessment

Lead Section

• Good; very well-written

Early Life

• Fine; backed by sources

Club Career

 Early Career 

• 'Fletcher Ross Rangers academy development officer Dave Horrocks recalls that Rashford was on a "different level" to (replace with 'as compared') other boys, playing a major role as the team won a tournament with 15 scouts from various clubs watching'
• 'Former United youth coach Paul McGuinness quickly saw Rashford's potential due to his athleticism both on and off the ball....' What does 'on and off the ball' mean? Replace 'ball' with field.
• What does 'cage football' mean? Make it clear.

 2015–16 season: Debut

• Fine

 2016–17 season: European success

• Why have words like 'tremendous fashion' been used? Clear violation of WP: PEACOCK
• 'As a player however he failed to score until 7 January 2017 when he scored a four-minute brace in the FA Cup against Jaap Stam's Reading, which ended 4–0' Where did he not score? Add commas here.

2018–19 season

• Again, words like 'devastating' player are not neutral
• These sections contain too much content, much of which will appeal only to a particular audience
• No need to describe every action of his, like his penalty as 'fearless'. Just mentioning it is enough here on Wikipedia.

I've stopped the review mid-way and went though the whole article. I found many instances of such usage, which goes against the neutral point of view. Improving this will take some time. Hence, I recommend that these issues be resolved. Once done, the article can be re-nominated. Kpddg ^(talk) 13:49, 6 January 2022 (UTC) reply

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
It is reasonably well written. a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b ( MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): It is factually accurate and verifiable. a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c ( OR): d ( copyvio and plagiarism): It is broad in its coverage. a (major aspects): b (focused): It follows the neutral point of view policy. Fair representation without bias: It is stable. No edit wars, etc.: It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate. a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall: Fail:
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This article fails