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Reviewer: Larry Hockett ( talk · contribs) 17:16, 28 August 2020 (UTC)
I can review this. I'll post some initial feedback soon - hopefully later today. Thanks to the nominator for making great efforts to improve the coverage of this subject matter on Wikipedia. Larry Hockett ( Talk) 17:16, 28 August 2020 (UTC)
After a quick readthrough, I can see that a few of the GA criteria are already met. The article is worded neutrally; the images have appropriate captions and license information; and there are no recent stability concerns. The content appears to be mostly sourced (with the exceptions noted below), and Earwig's Copyvio Detector returned nothing of concern. Most of my feedback has to do with clear, concise wording (criteria 1a and 1b). Before future nominations, a WP:GOCE request may be worth considering so that you don't have so much feedback to address during the seven-day GA review period, but the issues are certainly fixable here.
I think that's all the wording feedback I have. After you address these, I'm going to take a look at more of the references and make sure that she material is supported by them. I'll also make a quick pass and clean up any stray typos or minor style issues that I missed the first time. Thanks again for the work you have done to improve WP's coverage of this fun topic. Larry Hockett ( Talk) 19:51, 28 August 2020 (UTC)
MPJ-DK, good work. I made a quick copyediting pass for minor stuff like MOS:COMMA. I only have one more concern. In the CMLL section, I don't see this statement reflected in the source: "Marcela began her fifth CMLL World Women's Championship reign on November 19, 2018..." If you can address that, we can promote this. Thank you again for your work. Larry Hockett ( Talk) 11:23, 15 September 2020 (UTC)
Larry Hockett Done. MPJ-DK ( talk) 21:46, 15 September 2020 (UTC)
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Reviewer: Larry Hockett ( talk · contribs) 17:16, 28 August 2020 (UTC)
I can review this. I'll post some initial feedback soon - hopefully later today. Thanks to the nominator for making great efforts to improve the coverage of this subject matter on Wikipedia. Larry Hockett ( Talk) 17:16, 28 August 2020 (UTC)
After a quick readthrough, I can see that a few of the GA criteria are already met. The article is worded neutrally; the images have appropriate captions and license information; and there are no recent stability concerns. The content appears to be mostly sourced (with the exceptions noted below), and Earwig's Copyvio Detector returned nothing of concern. Most of my feedback has to do with clear, concise wording (criteria 1a and 1b). Before future nominations, a WP:GOCE request may be worth considering so that you don't have so much feedback to address during the seven-day GA review period, but the issues are certainly fixable here.
I think that's all the wording feedback I have. After you address these, I'm going to take a look at more of the references and make sure that she material is supported by them. I'll also make a quick pass and clean up any stray typos or minor style issues that I missed the first time. Thanks again for the work you have done to improve WP's coverage of this fun topic. Larry Hockett ( Talk) 19:51, 28 August 2020 (UTC)
MPJ-DK, good work. I made a quick copyediting pass for minor stuff like MOS:COMMA. I only have one more concern. In the CMLL section, I don't see this statement reflected in the source: "Marcela began her fifth CMLL World Women's Championship reign on November 19, 2018..." If you can address that, we can promote this. Thank you again for your work. Larry Hockett ( Talk) 11:23, 15 September 2020 (UTC)
Larry Hockett Done. MPJ-DK ( talk) 21:46, 15 September 2020 (UTC)