Needs a lit bit more expansion. Add the establishment time, travelling fans, yellow colour. This would be my final point of the review. Saha ❯❯❯ Stay safe 12:24, 4 January 2021 (UTC) DonePoppified (
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13:40, 4 January 2021 (UTC)reply
The lead should compile all the info present in the body. But things like Indian Sports Honours, 14 districts etc. aren't present in the body. DoneShahoodu (
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17:53, 16 December 2020 (UTC)reply
It says "12 other Indian states" but, not mentioned in the body. Saha ❯❯❯ Stay safe 07:27, 19 December 2020 (UTC) Comment: I missed to add 12. Now its DoneShahoodu (
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09:02, 19 December 2020 (UTC)reply
If there's not specific author of any source, nothing required to mention. Like its mentioned 'no-author' incitation [48]. its not required DoneShahoodu (
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17:12, 16 December 2020 (UTC)reply
It mentions "ISL" multiple times. A first time reader will have no idea what ISL is. Add "Indian Super League (ISL)" wherever its mentioned first. DoneShahoodu (
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06:39, 17 December 2020 (UTC)reply
Citation [13] doesnt say, Manjapadda is spread accross 44 countries.
"The active social ... to fans." - Even smaller fanclubs provide regular updates in social media. so, I dont think, its required to mention. DoneShahoodu (
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18:45, 21 December 2020 (UTC)reply
Any dimensions available for the tifo? if yes, add it. DonePoppified (
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In the section "Chants and tifos", it starts with "Apart from their official anthem, Manjappada..." - I would suggest adding some details for the anthem. search some Malayalam sources. DonePoppified (
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08:14, 2 January 2021 (UTC)reply
During the 2018–19 season, the Blasters were winless in 14 games and fans became dissatisfied with the management's indifference towards them. Although Manjappada boycotted a December 2018 game against Jamshedpur FC,[19] "We don’t intend to boycott our club’s matches, since our motto is 'Nammalk Nammalund' ('We have us')" stated the group. - not really sure what this means DoneShahoodu (
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14:20, 25 December 2020 (UTC)reply
There's a few refs that have weird |work parameters, such as Sportskeeda APP is the No 1 Personalised Sports APP available today. Just select your fav teams & players and you are done. Done.
Iamfarzan (
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13:54, 25 December 2020 (UTC)reply
Needs a lit bit more expansion. Add the establishment time, travelling fans, yellow colour. This would be my final point of the review. Saha ❯❯❯ Stay safe 12:24, 4 January 2021 (UTC) DonePoppified (
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13:40, 4 January 2021 (UTC)reply
The lead should compile all the info present in the body. But things like Indian Sports Honours, 14 districts etc. aren't present in the body. DoneShahoodu (
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17:53, 16 December 2020 (UTC)reply
It says "12 other Indian states" but, not mentioned in the body. Saha ❯❯❯ Stay safe 07:27, 19 December 2020 (UTC) Comment: I missed to add 12. Now its DoneShahoodu (
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09:02, 19 December 2020 (UTC)reply
If there's not specific author of any source, nothing required to mention. Like its mentioned 'no-author' incitation [48]. its not required DoneShahoodu (
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17:12, 16 December 2020 (UTC)reply
It mentions "ISL" multiple times. A first time reader will have no idea what ISL is. Add "Indian Super League (ISL)" wherever its mentioned first. DoneShahoodu (
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06:39, 17 December 2020 (UTC)reply
Citation [13] doesnt say, Manjapadda is spread accross 44 countries.
"The active social ... to fans." - Even smaller fanclubs provide regular updates in social media. so, I dont think, its required to mention. DoneShahoodu (
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18:45, 21 December 2020 (UTC)reply
Any dimensions available for the tifo? if yes, add it. DonePoppified (
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In the section "Chants and tifos", it starts with "Apart from their official anthem, Manjappada..." - I would suggest adding some details for the anthem. search some Malayalam sources. DonePoppified (
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08:14, 2 January 2021 (UTC)reply
During the 2018–19 season, the Blasters were winless in 14 games and fans became dissatisfied with the management's indifference towards them. Although Manjappada boycotted a December 2018 game against Jamshedpur FC,[19] "We don’t intend to boycott our club’s matches, since our motto is 'Nammalk Nammalund' ('We have us')" stated the group. - not really sure what this means DoneShahoodu (
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14:20, 25 December 2020 (UTC)reply
There's a few refs that have weird |work parameters, such as Sportskeeda APP is the No 1 Personalised Sports APP available today. Just select your fav teams & players and you are done. Done.
Iamfarzan (
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13:54, 25 December 2020 (UTC)reply